John Williams Poet Limerick

Candle Maker

Candle maker Iva Bentwick's
business couldn't take a trick,
So he changed his name
to one not so lame,
Now business is pretty slick.


alternate last line:     Now many candles are being lit.

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Kp Nunez April 28, 2015 at 1:02 PM LOL! Of course, with Bentwick for a candle business logo, who would buy? hahahaa So what's the new name now? I won't guess...lol! John Williams April 29, 2015 at 8:06 AM Hello Kim, His new name is Iva Straitun. No wonder business is going well. Hugs from John John Williams April 28, 2015 at 4:46 PM Hello Kim,,,,I guess a bent wick is no good to anyone, especially a candle maker. I haven't thought of his new name yet, leave it with me and I will get back to you. Thanks for your comment.....John