Candle Ballet

A burning desire,
Wax sweat glistens her figure: 
A scented routine.

Passion on the wall,
Illuminated shadow:
Ballet of the flame.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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September 14, 2011 at 12:23 PM
and a lovely ballet it is Raul.. such a fervent poem of passion and imagery.. nice to see u here again at PS.. hope all is well with u luv..
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