Get Your Premium Membership

Candid Capture Trimeric

Not quite the version of real time, caught calm in a candid capture; At once the art fades away, burned from memory into a filter; Caught calm in a candid capture; A moment ago you were boiling, finale fireworks on the Fourth of July; At once the art fades away, left in awe of your explosion; Fanned fire cooled to low key; Burned from memory into a filter, changed your speed way too fast; Emotional hand read 'Move On.'

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/6/2022 12:06:00 PM
Melani, that's a really neat form. Your monotetra the other day was new to me as well. I'm not very good at understanding poetry, but this makes me think of times when I see something, bring my camera out, and by the time I've gotten it out, I've a) missed seeing the moment myself, and b) missed capturing it on the camera as well.
Login to Reply
Udaeta Avatar
Melani Udaeta
Date: 4/7/2022 6:30:00 AM
Yes. Moments are so very fleeting. That is why photographs are precious. Have a wonderful day.

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry