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Canadian Winter Scenes

I love Canada for her wintry show, the red-breasted robins in trees; and fresh fallen white in a wild meadow, forests caressed by a cold breeze; serene ice rivers and streams that still flow ! We have aged primeval forests of snow, winter water colored sunsets; and magpie birds who sing a song of woe, I live with the snow- no regrets; and red cardinals hang on while winds blow ! High white draped mountain peaks cast a shadow, while north winds kiss the boreal; photographers take a nature photo. look at- in books pictorial; I love it when filigree flakes fall slow ! I love it when the flakes dance to and fro, so magical and enchanting; in the still calm I can just let it go, but the deep snow leaves me panting; oh, wish it would snow in each tomorrow ! _________________________ November 8, 2020 Poetry/Quintain-Sicilian/Canadian Winter Scenes Copyright Protected, ID 11-1303-358-08 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the contest, Quintain - Sicilian sponsor, Emile Pinet First Place
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Ligon Avatar
December 12, 2020 at 9:52 PM
The rhyme scheme with all the mono rhymes must have be a challenge to write, but it paid off beautifully!
La France Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 8:47 AM
Juliet, thanks for the compliment on my poem, yes, it took a while to create but yes it did pay off _Constance
Watt Avatar
December 11, 2020 at 11:50 AM
Beautiful from start to finish, Constance, and a great job with all the rhymes. Well worthy of your top finish, big congrats!
La France Avatar
December 11, 2020 at 3:50 PM
John, thanks for the compliment and for the congrats, appreciate _Constance
Lawless Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 4:29 PM
Now open the border and let me in.....just kiddin'...love the snow and the very visual presentation in this poem
La France Avatar
December 11, 2020 at 7:37 AM
John, thanks for the compliment on my poem, and yes, it will be great when the borders open again, but not sure you would like our winters, we get darn cold _Constance
Allison Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 2:18 PM
such beautiful description, no wonder you gained the top spot Constance, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
December 11, 2020 at 7:38 AM
Jan, thanks for the compliment on my poem and for the congrats, and HUGS, appreciate _Constance
Logan Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 12:59 PM
Congratulations on your win, Constance. I agree that snow is both magical and enchanting.
La France Avatar
December 11, 2020 at 7:38 AM
Jenna, thanks so much for the comment and the congratulations, appreciate _Constance
Kauffman Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 10:52 AM
Lovely images with a lyrical cadence, Constance. Beautiful tribute to Canada's winters and your love of the season! Congratulations on your first place win! Blessings!
La France Avatar
December 11, 2020 at 7:39 AM
Sam, thanks for the compliment on my poem and for the congratulations, blessing _Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 9:59 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a Beautiful" write and picture. I see the snow and feel the cold. Stay warn in your winter's snow. Enjoy your win with blessings............
La France Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 10:38 AM
Paula, thanks for the congratulations and the lovely comment, it is snowing here in Ottawa Canada today _Constance
Mcintosh Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 9:00 AM
I love this. It's beautiful - Congrats on your top win. God bless you sweet friend
La France Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 10:38 AM
Gina, thanks for the congrats and the beautiful _Constance
Pinet Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 8:25 AM
Congratulations Constance! Your poem has placed "First" in my PoetrySoup contest. You should be proud of your work, it is a wonderful example of this form of poetry. Very well done my friend, Emile.
La France Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 10:39 AM
Emile, thank you for another inspiring contest and for my great placement, I am so honored _Constance
One Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 7:17 AM
Lovely vivid imagery, sounds very cold though lol.
La France Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 7:22 AM
Silent, thanks for visiting and commenting, yes our winters get very very cold, like at times minus 40 _Constance
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 5:42 AM
Hello Constance, you painted a beautiful scene of the winter season. I felt like I was there. No snow here, we are having summer weather. Enjoy your day my friend.
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November 9, 2020 at 9:54 AM
Hello Conatance, To go walking in a winter forest together would be nice. It snowed here on November 1st. The ground was covered. Then it melted. Now the weather feels like summer. Your right winter is coming. Your friend. Darlene
La France Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 6:38 AM
Darlene, thank you for the visit and comment, wish we could go walking in winter, down some wintry forest path, sadly all our recent snow melted in Ottawa, Canada and it is warm here to but not summer like, though not for long, soon we will be in winter _Constance
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