Can You Touch a Shadow

Can you touch a shadow? Can you taste the wind? Can you feel a rainbow? Can you see deeply within?

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Sand Blown

Date: 12/19/2018 12:24:00 PM

colored shadows and sound...paradigm creations...camaflauge...white noise... but my mind sees 'music' : )

Sanford Weir
Date: 12/20/2018 12:33:00 AM

Sand, Thank you for your very intriguing comment. Seeing music is a special gift. Sanford

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 12/19/2018 8:38:00 AM

One can surely strive to :) enjoyed!

Sanford Weir
Date: 12/20/2018 12:28:00 AM

Maureen, Yes, to our journeys to our inner self is always worth the trip! Sanford

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/19/2018 8:24:00 AM

Interesting! Well written :)

Sanford Weir
Date: 12/20/2018 12:25:00 AM

Hedi, Thank you for taking the time to comment, Sanford