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Can You Not See Me

Can you not see me I am right here Do you not hear that It's something to fear I am so scared Yet I am so brave Still you cant see me but I am right here I heard you traveled to go morn a rock star I did not hear you leave to go morn my dear friend Still you cant see me Yet I am still right here Do you know who I am or do you even care I may not be a singer or even a actress You may not even know me but you hear what goes on here I see now you may not even care You still cant see me Yet I am still right here You have your freedom and that's why I am here I am fighting for you because that's how much I care To My Dear Cousin who is being sent to Iraq next month.. I can see you and I do care! Please be careful and thank you for all that you are doing and to all the others who are fighting for us to keep us safe and our freedom. I Love you Jason!!!

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Date: 9/1/2009 9:07:00 AM
I know that you are very concerned about this. Our youth are in danger when they have to serve. You have done a good job of letting him know you care. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 9/1/2009 5:18:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us today Kristi. Wishing you the best always in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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