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Can You Imagine

“Ô, Wanderess, Wanderess When did you feel your most euphoric kiss? Was I the source of your greatest bliss?” - Roman Payne Can you imagine being young again - going back where your longings first began when feelings – bright tulips – sprang inside you? Springtime yearnings blossomed; they grew and grew. Can you imagine being young and free and getting past (at last) timidity? While quivering with sweet desire’s delight, first love you tasted deep into the night. Can you imagine going to that place which years of living manage to erase. Could you return and once again make real the vividness of what you used to feel? Can you imagine love fresh and sublime? I try to bring it back to life with rhyme. But even when I write of it, I know . . . bright tulips of my youth will not regrow. Jan. 24, 2021

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Date: 1/29/2021 1:30:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in my Can You Imagine contest with this excellent poem, I loved it and the quote too _Constance
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Date: 1/29/2021 5:06:00 AM
Beautiful recap of innocence of youth! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 1/28/2021 1:13:00 AM
Andrea, back here with congrats for your first place win.. Hugs ~ Ani
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Date: 1/27/2021 4:37:00 PM
A beautiful imaginative poem Andrea, young love never dies - though the memories fade as we age. Congratulations on your win... Belle
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Date: 1/27/2021 11:10:00 AM
Great transition threads throughout your poem Andrea, from dreamy reminiscent beginning to the reality check and slight nightmarish ending, so well crafted, congratulations, cheers David.
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Date: 1/26/2021 10:05:00 PM
Good topic for the contest. The last stanza is my favorite.
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Date: 1/26/2021 6:50:00 PM
A sweet bird of youth. It flies away never to return leaving but memories. Except for those of us who decide to not look in the mirror and remain young forever. lol A lovely write my friend. God Bless, JB
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Date: 1/25/2021 6:02:00 AM
We can travel through time with imagination, but youth like the tulips will not bloom again, Beautiful write Andrea
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Date: 1/25/2021 5:25:00 AM
Wonderful it is to be reminiscing in memories of youth, Andrea. I can imagine, it was tender and beautiful for you--and still is!
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Date: 1/25/2021 4:29:00 AM
Love this! A fave!
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Date: 1/25/2021 1:50:00 AM
Blossoms of vivid imagination of the teen and youth that could never be withered and faded. As Jan said, so romantic. I loved the first and third stanzas. A LOVELY write, straight from the heart. Best wishes Andrea. Hugs ~ Ani
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Date: 1/25/2021 1:07:00 AM
I never wished to be young again. I only wish it to be over quickly. ~~
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/25/2021 1:53:00 PM
I get you. If you can't go back, 'tis better to go quickly into the night (instead of "not gently" as Dylan would say)I hope I will go quickly when my time comes. How horrible to have to linger, for example , with alzheimers. A fate worse than death.
Date: 1/24/2021 8:25:00 PM
Hello Andrea … being young again would be fine, but in the era when I was young. Not too sure about being young today though. Another fine thought provoking poem Andrea - thank you - Lindsay
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/24/2021 9:04:00 PM
Yeah in today's world it would suck
Date: 1/24/2021 6:31:00 PM
lovely with melancholic spritz...nicely written Andrea
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Date: 1/24/2021 5:07:00 PM
Hi Andrea, You have captured the feeling of being young and in love very well. I can imagine how I felt back then and it was amazing. Those are some memories that I shall never forget. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful evening my friend:-) Alexis
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/24/2021 9:06:00 PM
Yep, unforgettable. Thanx, Alexis
Date: 1/24/2021 2:48:00 PM
oh those memories Andrea, you are such a romantic i am not lol:-) hugs jan xx
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