Notes About The Poem

Riding Amtrak's coach surrounded me with people talking loudly, so I moved to the quiet car. The conductor came by and made an announcement with ear piercing ferocity about the rules. "It's like a library," he said. As he was yelling, I got up to throw away some litter and said to him, "Why not speak a bit more softly?" Let's just say he didn't respond well. Not the best trained indvidual from a customer service standpoint. Most of the Amtrak people I've dealt with seem much nicer than that. For example, on the return trip, my leg was cut by the metal under the seat as I sat down. I plan to send a letter to their chairman suggesting they put a rubber piece over the metal since I can't be the only one this ever happened to. 

Can you hear me now?

Amtrak with equipment’s endowed
Each car comes with stainless steel shroud
Yet my quiet ride
Was sadly denied
By announcement volumes too loud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Rodgers Avatar
July 25, 2025 at 7:06 AM
Hello Duke, You’ve turned a clunky announcement into poetic protest, and I love that the rhythm keeps its cool even while your patience snaps. Next ride try earplugs and maybe a haiku to soothe the soul. LOL! I always try to go to the quiet car in the morning and you are right not always as quite as it could be. Summer Blessings, Duke, Daniel
Beaufort Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 9:32 AM
Daniel, if you’re taking trains often, you get it completely. You’re correct….i was so annoyed I wrote this limerick on the train to ease my annoyance. Earplugs from this point forward…or even a noise cancelling headset. There’s so much noise everywhere we miss hearing nature speak to us. Smiles!!
Poet Avatar
July 24, 2025 at 2:42 AM
Duke, my friend, your limerick poem contrasts the well-equipped, luxurious Amtrak train with the disruptive habit of loud notifications. The irony of a peaceful voyage being disrupted by loudness illustrates how external forces can affect personal peace and satisfaction. You used "stainless steel shroud" to describe the train's clean, modern form, indicating utility and sterility.
Beaufort Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 8:33 AM
SP, funny when we look closely at what they have and what they do, the requirement for careful and seasoned management appears evident. They have a lot of work to do and don’t have all the resources they need.
Vaso Avatar
July 23, 2025 at 10:50 PM
Maybe he gets fired and gets a new job at the Library! LOL
Beaufort Avatar
July 26, 2025 at 11:57 AM
Arthur, that is a very funny idea!!! I wonder how long that job would last! Smiles!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 23, 2025 at 2:33 PM
clever write...how frustrating! Noise is a challenge and that injury! oh my
Beaufort Avatar
July 26, 2025 at 9:38 AM
Sara, thanks for the sympathy....at least I've recovered!
Lamoureux Avatar
July 22, 2025 at 1:00 PM
Cleverly expressed. Sorry for your injury.
Beaufort Avatar
July 23, 2025 at 4:54 AM
Richard, I was just lucky I was wearing long pants and the wound appears to be superficial...a scratch that bled a little. Seems to me Amtrak is very short on cash and the condition of the rolling stock is not the best. That's how we do it in the USA. We get what we pay for!!! I also will now have ear plugs for any future trips!! Smiles!!
Goldsmith Avatar
July 22, 2025 at 9:45 AM
I enjoyed reading your "Can you hear me now?" Limerick write. Thanks for the note on the top. Great Picture... Have a fun day writing away............
Beaufort Avatar
July 23, 2025 at 4:45 AM
Paula, glad you liked this. Truth be told...I was so annoyed by the interaction with the conductor, that I wrote this to calm myself down. Amtrak currently has no chief executive so I sent them the details on their web site. Hopefully someone responds for the benefit of train travelers everywhere in the USA. LOL and Smiles!!!
Lane Avatar
July 22, 2025 at 8:17 AM
Is there no place to find peace on earth? They owe you a new pair of pants, Duke.
Beaufort Avatar
July 23, 2025 at 4:36 AM
Lin, it's amazing how much abuse hits us when we travel and place ourselves in the hands of the carrier. We would hope they would take the necessary measures to keep us from getting hurt. I seem to be lucky--no infection that I can see, so I won't be leaving Earth in the next few days
Canerdy Avatar
July 22, 2025 at 8:07 AM
Excellent limerick, Duke! Enjoyed. Janice
Canerdy Avatar
July 26, 2025 at 5:57 AM
I'm staying inside nearly all the time. Next week~~~temps in high nineties, heat indices up to 112! I feel sorry for those who work outside! Have a good weekend.
Beaufort Avatar
July 22, 2025 at 8:15 AM
Thanks Janice. At least the air conditioning was working. Amtrak doesn't have a current CEO...so I just sent them feedback as allowed on their site. We only do this so things can get better for all of us. I'm not holding my breath, but we might as well let them know what's happening. Hope you can stay cool!!!
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