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Riding Amtrak's coach surrounded me with people talking loudly, so I moved to the quiet car. The conductor came by and made an announcement with ear piercing ferocity about the rules. "It's like a library," he said. As he was yelling, I got up to throw away some litter and said to him, "Why not speak a bit more softly?" Let's just say he didn't respond well. Not the best trained indvidual from a customer service standpoint. Most of the Amtrak people I've dealt with seem much nicer than that. For example, on the return trip, my leg was cut by the metal under the seat as I sat down. I plan to send a letter to their chairman suggesting they put a rubber piece over the metal since I can't be the only one this ever happened to. 

Amtrak with equipment’s endowed Each car comes with stainless steel shroud Yet my quiet ride Was sadly denied By announcement volumes too loud

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Date: 7/22/2025 1:00:00 PM
Cleverly expressed. Sorry for your injury.
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Date: 7/22/2025 9:45:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your "Can you hear me now?" Limerick write. Thanks for the note on the top. Great Picture... Have a fun day writing away............
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Date: 7/22/2025 8:17:00 AM
Is there no place to find peace on earth? They owe you a new pair of pants, Duke.
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Date: 7/22/2025 8:07:00 AM
Excellent limerick, Duke! Enjoyed. Janice
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Date: 7/22/2025 8:15:00 AM
Thanks Janice. At least the air conditioning was working. Amtrak doesn't have a current CEO...so I just sent them feedback as allowed on their site. We only do this so things can get better for all of us. I'm not holding my breath, but we might as well let them know what's happening. Hope you can stay cool!!!

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