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Can You Hear Me Now?


No house or cell phone
No way to call or to text
Guess I'll just.........HOLLER!

Copyright © Abe Lopez | Year Posted 2009

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September 17, 2009 at 7:15 PM

LOL cute here ... the title of this poem is the title I'm going to call my book if I can ever get it together ... LOL ... its mainly $$$ that is holding me back but also sloth ... smile ... thanks for your recent comment

September 14, 2009 at 12:46 PM

Made me chuckle Abe, koolio poem>>James

May 2, 2009 at 6:27 AM

awesome! I can hear you be awesome!! :) Yes.

April 18, 2009 at 5:03 PM

OMG - this is too awesome! Combined with the title, and how often our cable goes out and cell phones die, I am just loving this! Sorry I missed it! Love, shar

April 17, 2009 at 11:34 PM

I like the simplicity.

April 13, 2009 at 7:21 PM

hahahahahahaha funny

Maryam Jameela Haniff

April 13, 2009 at 2:53 PM

lol this is tooo funny...well done...love n smiles Maryam*

Ernilando Tugaff

April 10, 2009 at 10:39 PM

Hi Abe, its me again. This is a funny one. It made me laugh. Laughter is the best medicine. Keep on posting. Ernilando

April 1, 2009 at 9:39 AM

The last line got a chuckle out of me. Interesting perspective. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Karen

April 1, 2009 at 2:20 AM

ahhh the good ole days

March 31, 2009 at 1:13 PM

Ha, nice senryu call, this is what I have to do to my mom. Love Elizabeth

March 31, 2009 at 1:09 PM

Funny senryu Abe, nice work. Tyler

Savannah Rose Harper

March 31, 2009 at 11:46 AM

nice real lifeness

March 31, 2009 at 11:36 AM

pretty funny man ,nice mate

March 31, 2009 at 10:58 AM

awsomely done Mr. L!!!

Christopher Higgins

March 31, 2009 at 10:40 AM

Funny piece...I think that is how they did it back in the day..just yell.

Carolyn Devonshire

March 31, 2009 at 9:36 AM

Imagine, Abe, a voice that can be "heard" without the Verizon network. Thank you for giving me a hearty laugh today!!

Carrie Richards

March 31, 2009 at 7:19 AM

You put a smile on my face with this....I almost wish it were that simple! ...Love, Carrie

March 31, 2009 at 6:51 AM

I hear ya, LOL! Excellent, I have definately been there! Great writing, very creative. Smiles from Lolita

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