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Can You Hear Me Now?

No house or cell phone No way to call or to text Guess I'll just.........HOLLER!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/17/2009 7:15:00 PM
LOL cute here ... the title of this poem is the title I'm going to call my book if I can ever get it together ... LOL ... its mainly $$$ that is holding me back but also sloth ... smile ... thanks for your recent comment
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Date: 9/14/2009 12:46:00 PM
Made me chuckle Abe, koolio poem>>James
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Date: 5/2/2009 6:27:00 AM
awesome! I can hear you be awesome!! :) Yes.
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Date: 4/18/2009 5:03:00 PM
OMG - this is too awesome! Combined with the title, and how often our cable goes out and cell phones die, I am just loving this! Sorry I missed it! Love, shar
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Date: 4/17/2009 11:34:00 PM
I like the simplicity.
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Date: 4/13/2009 7:21:00 PM
hahahahahahaha funny
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Date: 4/13/2009 2:53:00 PM
lol this is tooo funny...well done...love n smiles Maryam*
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Date: 4/10/2009 10:39:00 PM
Hi Abe, its me again. This is a funny one. It made me laugh. Laughter is the best medicine. Keep on posting. Ernilando
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Date: 4/1/2009 9:39:00 AM
The last line got a chuckle out of me. Interesting perspective. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Karen
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Date: 4/1/2009 2:20:00 AM
ahhh the good ole days
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Date: 3/31/2009 1:13:00 PM
Ha, nice senryu call, this is what I have to do to my mom. Love Elizabeth
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Date: 3/31/2009 1:09:00 PM
Funny senryu Abe, nice work. Tyler
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Date: 3/31/2009 11:46:00 AM
nice real lifeness
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Date: 3/31/2009 11:36:00 AM
pretty funny man ,nice mate
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Date: 3/31/2009 10:58:00 AM
awsomely done Mr. L!!!
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Date: 3/31/2009 10:40:00 AM
Funny piece...I think that is how they did it back in the day..just yell.
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Date: 3/31/2009 9:36:00 AM
Imagine, Abe, a voice that can be "heard" without the Verizon network. Thank you for giving me a hearty laugh today!!
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Date: 3/31/2009 7:19:00 AM
You put a smile on my face with this....I almost wish it were that simple! ...Love, Carrie
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Date: 3/31/2009 6:51:00 AM
I hear ya, LOL! Excellent, I have definately been there! Great writing, very creative. Smiles from Lolita
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