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Can you hear me?

my voice called out twice, but i couldn’t stop there, i wrote about a fatal vice, your eyes being elsewhere, it can be named assumption, but i think it speaks for itself, my ability to daringly jump in, while further neglecting myself, and every time it’s a rapture, of the patient chasing game, it’s a bore without a capture, of soul who’s quite the same, but i know how to leave it too, it’s a choice i haven’t yet made, because it ruins the idea of you, and the mythology that i’ve laid.

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Date: 3/1/2025 4:59:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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