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Can You Forgive Me

Would it help to say I’m sorry about the misery I brought? I never wanted to hurt you, whether you believe that or not. I’m not happy seeing you cry, fueling anxiety’s climb. And I’ll disappear from your life if you say, I'm wasting my time. You must believe that I acted like I did because I love you. And I thought if I felt that way, naturally, you loved me too. I never thought for a moment that you'd fall for another man. And when I saw him kissing you, I freaked out, and he up and ran. I can't say I'm sorry he left, but I'm sorry I made him flee. And I’m begging you on my knees, please darling, can you forgive me? (Quatrain) 2/16/2015

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Date: 3/17/2018 1:39:00 PM
Ah! The drama of love triangles!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/17/2018 1:54:00 PM
Thanks Line, your visits are most appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/17/2015 5:02:00 PM
Excellent pen Emile! Well articulated piece, my dear friend. Nice read! A 7 from me! I wish you a very lovely day! In his light! God bless you!:) D"
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/17/2015 8:51:00 PM
Thanks Dorian, you are a treasure. Emile.
Date: 2/17/2015 9:44:00 AM
A heartfelt apology carries much weight. And, hopefully, brings the desired result. Good luck to you. Thanks for sharing.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/17/2015 10:12:00 AM
Once more I am in your debt. Thank you. Emile.
Date: 2/16/2015 9:41:00 PM
Well, I big on forgiveness -- asking and giving, seems like she may need to do some asking . . . I say mercy not pity -- you don't need her to feel sorry for you. Love these types of poem -- raw, powerful, heart-felt. Much love and light dear friend.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/17/2015 9:23:00 AM
Thanks David, your input is welcome anytime. Emile.
Date: 2/16/2015 3:01:00 PM
Such a moving and emotional poem. Heartbreak drips from the lines... as does, "Forgive me".... well done !!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/16/2015 4:03:00 PM
Thanks Debra, I appreciate your warm words of encouragement. Emile.
Date: 2/16/2015 2:18:00 PM
Emile, such a heartfelt piece. Good luck in the contest. Janet
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/16/2015 4:01:00 PM
Thanks Janet, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 2/16/2015 12:16:00 PM
oh a heartbreaking scenario Emile - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/16/2015 12:50:00 PM
Thanks Jan, you're the best. Emile.

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