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Can My Soul

Your so good to Paradise you'll go But I think there is something you should know You can can my soul and take it with you For your allowed an item or two So down on earth a heathen I can jest Living my ways without any sacredness It's just to hard for me to be any good I think this is in heaven understood I really don't need my soul with me Like my consciences I really never need But in heaven with you is best So when I finish down here in paradise I rest But just one thing before you go Be gentle with the can that has my soul And I think it's best of all possibilities Take an can opener it's what we might need

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Date: 4/26/2021 9:59:00 AM
Chucke! Interesting theme and idea well-presented in fine quatrains, Fritz. But, of course, you know all that!
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