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Camp-Meeting Grounds Martha's Vineyard 2009

Summer lay lazily over the land.
The languid weight of wind and water 
bowing tree limbs, chasing sand 
squalls over sidewalks.

Cyclist meander down aisles
of Rose of Sharon shrubbery past 
banks of day lilies and Pez-purple
hydrangeas.

Tourist, colorful as the flowers,
buzz through seaside shops in flip flops 
the color of Necco wafers.
Their gummy soles making sucking 
sounds upon the linoleum.

In gingerbread slumber like fairy-tale children,
they gather in pink, lime-green, and purple houses.
The poor of a Christian God have become 
the rich of a capitalist nation. 
They hoard their paper-lantern dream.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Macmillan Avatar
April 23, 2016 at 8:09 AM
I like the dual-tone of this one, how the mood changed. It's sudden, almost shocking, but by carrying it out through the last three lines, it reminded me of a volta, instead. And look at YOU! 2009? You had it down pat seven years ago! WE just had to catch up! xoxox Dee
Guzzi Avatar
April 23, 2016 at 3:20 PM
And look at the number of reads? Thanks Dee. I should take another pass at this and make it something else.
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
November 3, 2009 at 8:16 AM
Wow! That says so much. I love reading and thinking about your opinions. And they are well put to beauty. Smiling, Dane Ann (Call if you wish.)
Kendrick Avatar
November 3, 2009 at 7:20 AM
Interesting thoughts put to pen. Part of it is so peaceful. Keep writing. Sara
Goff Avatar
November 2, 2009 at 5:46 PM
yes, I agree with the other comments, fresh, popsicle images make this art poetry beg to have an accompanying painting or watercolor or even something like Dane Ann's art!...gosh, Deb, your last stanza is wildly wonderful! "gingerbread slumber" whoooosh! cooool!!!!! (fav)
Richards Avatar
November 2, 2009 at 2:18 PM
I LOVE LOVE this poem!! Your candy-land descriptions are unique, clever and original...as is the paper-lantern dream!!! LOVE it!!! This poem as yummy as cotton candy!!
Haick Avatar
November 2, 2009 at 1:32 PM
Just beautiful, Deborah!! This had me transported to a beautiful summer day! Peace and love, Audrey
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