Camp Kitchen Tanka

sautéed encounter
across my sizzling steak
our intercourse flared
ignited our excitement
shared seared passions smoke
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Duggan Avatar
January 1, 2018 at 11:08 PM
Ohhhhh! that sounds like and Aussie Barby, sizzling steaks and sausages, yum. Hope you are well Scott, take care and a HAPPY NEW YEAR......Vera
Horne Avatar
March 5, 2017 at 5:41 PM
wow, a hot, hot, hot write here
Callus Avatar
October 10, 2016 at 11:15 AM
Wow! Sizzling hot passion! Undoubtedly readers will hunger for more! Full marks to you, Scott. Regards // paul
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September 27, 2016 at 11:49 PM
The passion Smells good from here... Scott. Sizzling.... Linda
Horsman Avatar
September 27, 2016 at 7:32 AM
Point me to this place scott, an excellent tanka,
Muideen Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 12:56 PM
I enjoyed reading this beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing......A.M.
Dietrich Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 6:39 PM
that was funny about the fertility ads. I love when the ads match something in a person's poem that way!! and wow, this tanka is SMOKIN'
Sathasivam Avatar
September 1, 2016 at 2:21 AM
Excellent tanka. Well done. Thanks for sharing it.
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 30, 2016 at 4:06 PM
Sizzling and sensual Scott! 7 ; )
Dietrich Avatar
August 30, 2016 at 3:25 PM
wow, now that is one hot tanka!!
Smith Avatar
August 30, 2016 at 10:53 AM
Well now you just got me hungry Scott...excellent Tanka
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