Camp Freely By the Sea

Quite frankly (now this is between you and me),
his folks should have sent him to camp by the sea;
’tis more entertaining,
and takes far less training,
when you can just go to the ocean to pee.
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H/T to Gershon’s And Away He Goes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Wolf Avatar
January 21, 2023 at 7:28 PM
Brilliant thinking, Jeff. That's why you are paid the 'big bucks,' I know...
Bauer Avatar
January 21, 2023 at 12:39 PM
ha! i'm sure the ocean is filled with people's pee! nice one, jeff!
Kyser Avatar
January 21, 2023 at 1:32 PM
ha, thanks, Ilene!
Tor Avatar
January 21, 2023 at 12:12 PM
Lol You and Gershon are nutty lol...
Kyser Avatar
January 21, 2023 at 1:32 PM
one of my favorite parts of the site - back and forths with other poets :-)
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