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Camelot of Love

Amongst many, feeling so lonely, Strange situation life has brought And all hopes placed on one, last stand. One that sets you free, turning gray walls into blue skies. Encouraged by shimmering visions in mind, Seeking something that has already died, Within modern walls its freedom denied. Yet, will and spirit remain With little to lose and much to gain, To go on decision is made. Subtle kiss moon has blown To lost wanderer walking alone, Traces of light it has shown, Towering over his dream, Camelot of love. Awaken by dawn he marches on, In hopes of finding what cannot be found. And so his quest goes on, Passing shapeless halls, Guided by lights already gone. Restless nights haunt him now Unable to put mind at ease Not knowing how to sleep Not knowing how to please. Last night he heard a voice Brought from far by a whispering wall Saying you don't have to win it all, Just be your own. Thus this chapter to end is drawn, Of a story with ending unknown. Amongst many, feeling so lonely, Strange situation life has brought And all hopes placed on one, last stand. One that sets you free, turning gray walls into blue skies.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/6/2016 9:09:00 PM
Poetry can really elevate our spirit...with this piece , I can definitely say that I am inspired. You have penned your thoughts in a very pragmatic way...7/7 This is going to be my fav...:)
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Date: 2/20/2016 8:38:00 PM
Davor, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 2/17/2016 10:21:00 AM
great imagery Davor... LINDA
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