CayCay Godwin Poet Rhyme

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Came Out From the Sun

One couple of days, I came out from the sun
cause a day an apple keeps my doc on the run.
A hand in a bird is less than birds aground
so I searched all day to keep them unfound.

Now, I needed a night of war and noise
to never regain my energy and poise.
My wife was loving, my children sweet cued
which, of course, increased my stressed attitude.

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Ron VanHooser December 1, 2025 at 12:44 PM OK, this one took me several reads, and I enjoyed each one, but I kept going back. Interesting, well done, most definitely held my interest. Keep up the good work! Ron

Beryl Edmonds October 19, 2025 at 6:01 PM A very amusing take on the contest theme CayCay, love it… Beryl

Andrea Dietrich October 19, 2025 at 2:10 PM Love it. Very cleverly done. One of my favorite contests of the past month for writing and for reading the entries into it.

John Read October 19, 2025 at 2:01 AM Enjoyed reading your poem CayCay hope it does well in the contest God bless.

Sam Kauffman October 17, 2025 at 1:02 PM Had me giggling, CayCay! Hope things get more peaceful! Best wishes for the contest! All the best! CayCay Godwin October 17, 2025 at 1:15 PM Oh, yay, thanks for telling me I induced giggles. Was concerned it might be too off the wall (though I personally LOVE off the wall.) Thanks, Sam CayCay

Anne-Lise Andresen October 17, 2025 at 11:58 AM - CayCay, ... terribly stressful to read, I'll take an apple :) - Have a great weekend :) - hugs CayCay Godwin October 17, 2025 at 1:20 PM 'terribly stressful to read' - you so funny!! I'll give you an apple so we can chain a doctor and deny him any apples until he helps you. That's a HORRIBLY good plan???? CayCay

Paula Goldsmith October 17, 2025 at 11:25 AM What a creative/fun write you have here. Great Fun Picture. Love Both... "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a fun day/weekend writing away............... CayCay Godwin October 17, 2025 at 1:21 PM Thank you, Paula. CayCay

David Crandall October 17, 2025 at 10:43 AM This is top-notch, good 'ol, nonsense, well done CayCay! CayCay Godwin October 17, 2025 at 1:22 PM THE nonsense writing king said, 'top-notch' so I already won. Thanks, David. CayCay

Paige Hind October 16, 2025 at 8:33 PM Interesting, cynical lol CayCay Godwin October 17, 2025 at 1:23 PM What can you do? Didn't mean to do cynical but read it after reading your comment, and, yeah, I can see how it appears that way rather than just plain silly and off the wall. Thanks, Paige. CayCay

sara Etgen-Baker October 16, 2025 at 5:19 PM unique and creative...best wishes with this contest entry, hugs, Sara CayCay Godwin October 17, 2025 at 1:24 PM Thank you, Sara. CayCay