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Calm On the Farm

"Can you feel the soul of an abandoned house;

        can you hear the whispering? " 

                                    Quote by _Constance La France


Our farmhouse holds memories.
Only in my heart, daydreams
It burned with wall's treasuries.
Windows gone letting in sunbeams.

Reminiscence's aroma
Flows with each deluge.
Even though like glaucoma
My fragmented thoughts refuge.

Though to abuse subjected
Where was no bathroom, doghouse.
Only dad's love protected.
Inside walls of our farmhouse

Written: 5/31/23
For Constance La France
Contest: Writing Challenge "C" Quotes


This is the Ae Freislighe form/I may have used one syllable too many in a couple of lines just could not think of a way to change it to only 7.

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Sotto Poet June 6, 2023 at 10:10 AM Back with heartfelt Congratulations, dear Sara. Your top contest win is amply deserved. Sara Kendrick June 6, 2023 at 12:37 PM Why, thank you, Lasaad. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Valsa George June 6, 2023 at 5:19 AM Your old farm house is resonant with memories. Beautiful poem. Congratulations on your first place win, dear Sara ! Sara Kendrick June 6, 2023 at 12:33 PM Thank you, Valsa, for dropping by with congratulations and a nice comment. Sara

Jack Horne June 5, 2023 at 5:17 AM Very glad to see this was a winner - must try this form Sara Kendrick June 5, 2023 at 1:24 PM Jack, Yes, you definitely should try this form. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen June 5, 2023 at 2:52 AM - A wonderful poem with old memories, Sara - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs Sara Kendrick June 5, 2023 at 3:00 AM Thank you, Anne-Lise, for dropping by with congratulations. I appreciate it. Sara

Christuraj Alex June 4, 2023 at 1:02 AM "Reminiscence's aroma Flows with each deluge" - Beautifully written. Congratulations! Sara Kendrick June 4, 2023 at 2:56 AM Why, thank you, Alex. I appreciate the thoughtful visit with congratulations. Sara

Constance La France June 3, 2023 at 7:03 PM Sara, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations and well done ! Sara Kendrick June 4, 2023 at 2:52 AM Constance, Thank you for the honor of being there on the list. I appreciate you dropping by to let me know I placed. Sara

Andrea Dietrich June 1, 2023 at 12:50 PM a charming look back at the past, Sara. I will always remember my grandpa's yellow farmhouse. Sara Kendrick June 1, 2023 at 2:01 PM Andrea, Yellow a delightful color for a home. Glad that you had a grandpa in your past. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Sotto Poet June 1, 2023 at 10:24 AM Artfully crafted lines evoke a wistful longing for your ancestral homestead, Sara. The notion that the walls bear witness to a bygone era, a legacy now departed, is a poignant one and complemented beautifully by your selected quotation. Congratulations on a superb submission, and best of luck in the contest. Sara Kendrick June 1, 2023 at 11:24 AM I am honored at the high praise of this one. Thank you, Lasaad for dropping by and taking time to comment. I appreciate the well wishes in the contest also. Sara

Alexis Y. June 1, 2023 at 5:31 AM Hi Sara, You have penned a well written nostalgic write. It worked so well with the quote you chose. Great job. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis Sara Kendrick June 1, 2023 at 8:38 AM Thank you, Alexis. I appreciate the visit to my page. I appreciate the smiley face with have a great day. Sara

Victor Buhagiar June 1, 2023 at 2:27 AM The important thing is to take part in the contest. If you don't win, the world will still rotate. Sara Kendrick June 1, 2023 at 3:22 AM Wow!! Victor, I thought that I might cause the earth's demise if I did not place in a contest. LOL..I have entered many contests and did not place, but I survived. Thanks for dropping by. I appreciate your continued support by reading my work. I know you might be tired of holding up all this weight though. Sara

Beryl Edmonds May 31, 2023 at 6:06 PM A lovely nostalgic write on your family’s farmhouse Sara. I love the idea that walls hold treasuries, the memoirs of a saga that used to exist before the family made their exit… Belle Sara Kendrick June 1, 2023 at 3:17 AM Why, thank you, Belle. Yes, it was sad to see the place with the house gone instead of being improved and lived in. Sara

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri May 31, 2023 at 10:14 AM A lovely nostalgic poem recalling a farmhouse seens to have been burnt down. I like how you called it treasuries yay! Kudos for this fab bittersweet recollection.  >>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<^^^^^^^^>>>>>>>><<<<<< Plz also read and comment my newest poem Sara Kendrick May 31, 2023 at 4:09 PM Thank you for the nice review of my work. Yes, the farmhouse did burn down after we moved to another place. Sara