Nette Onclaud Poet Tetractys

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Calm of Waters

clear
waters
ripple down
like lace  finery-
circling hedges bathed by sprays of pearled mist

how waves' rhythmic symphony grants relief
as  gush of  calm
quells pained soul--
healing
me



For Eve Roper's Contest: Double Tetractys 3
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checked via howmanyayllables.com
9/29/2020

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Sara Kendrick October 7, 2020 at 2:43 PM Congrats on your winning work. Way to go for the contest. Sara..I like the end about healing me. Running water has ions that are healing for sure.

Eve Roper October 2, 2020 at 5:59 PM Thank you for participating in the Double Tetractys 3 contest, Nette. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve"

Anne-Lise Andresen October 2, 2020 at 7:52 AM - Beautiful symphony, Nette :) - Congratulations on your third place in the contest :) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Linda Alice Fowler October 2, 2020 at 6:09 AM Nice one Nette. Very beautiful. Congratulations on the win! Linda

John Castellenas October 2, 2020 at 3:40 AM Beautiful use of words. The poem was a pleasure to read. I agree, a flowing river, can create peace. Thank you Nette for sharing the amazing poetry.

Susan Ashley October 1, 2020 at 9:48 PM Nette, it’s such a pleasure to return and offer you my congratulations on your wonderful win with this exquisite poem. It is even lovelier with a second read. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Darlene De Beaulieu October 1, 2020 at 9:48 AM Hello Nette, oh Nette, this is a beautifully created poem. I feel the same way about water. The sound of the waves heal me. :ooling at the water heals me. Enjoy your day my friend. hugs.

Joanna Daniel October 1, 2020 at 12:25 AM Wonderful, Nette, you paint magic with your words:)

Vijay Pandit September 30, 2020 at 11:16 AM Beautiful done, Nette--splendid nature images permeate your words.

Tom Cunningham September 30, 2020 at 10:16 AM So well composed Nette, I wish you good luck in the contest. Tom

Susan Ashley September 30, 2020 at 9:15 AM Ohh, your poetic pen so gracefully takes my breath away, Nette. Such exquisite tender expression. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes to you, dear poetess and friend.. ~Susan

Regina Mcintosh September 30, 2020 at 6:44 AM A gentle embrace of the spirit. Beautifully done, my friend. God bless you