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Calm

"A bouquet of lingering stars in lull of velvet satin darkness, forever I give to you, my love. Quote_by Poet" It's so perfect, calm, and tranquil; My spirit is truthful thankful. Night full of vivid imagery, A mood full of bewitchery. Moons soften flame shines like before Giving way to those I adore. A calm above, a full-dress night, The vastness fades in dawns first light. Look upon your face as I wake A calm within my mind you make When you awake, thee I'll embrace Draw a breath, a wee sound meek pace. As quaking crisp blooms and leaves sigh Umber earth spurn to say good-bye The allure afresh, as hopes soar Opening symphonies once more 1/11/2022 C Form - Couplet Poetry Contest 1. calm Sponsored by: Constance La France
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Date: 2/1/2022 9:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Calm" is a beautiful story/write. Have a blessed day with your win...............
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Date: 1/31/2022 6:06:00 AM
"Night full of vivid imagery, A mood full of bewitchery" - Beautiful.Congratulations!
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Date: 1/30/2022 2:34:00 PM
Eve, congratulations on your First Place win in my C Forms - Couplet contest with your beautifully penned poem and I love your quote too ~Constance
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Date: 1/15/2022 4:31:00 AM
Absolutely lovely dear Eve - you have a great talent and flair for poetry whatever theme you care to choose. Best wishes in the contest. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/12/2022 6:57:00 AM
Well-written, Eve, a worthy write with a beautiful concluding couplet. Love the "full-dress" night of vast calm fading to the dawn of just another day. Quite the reverse of the usual spiritual thought.
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Date: 1/11/2022 11:40:00 PM
You could turn this for the contest. Hugs.
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Date: 1/11/2022 7:18:00 PM
Dreamy-creamy good, Eve. It's just what I need to read to settle my nerves before going off to sleep. Thanks!! :) Gershon
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Date: 1/11/2022 5:57:00 PM
Eve, your couplets are extremely beautiful. I like them. I wish you the very best in the New Year and hope that you can always take great pleasure in this "marvelous, peaceful, and calm attitude."
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Date: 1/11/2022 5:28:00 PM
Eve, these couplets are absolutely splendid. I wish you all the best in the New Year and may you enjoy this "perfect, calm, and tranquil spirit."
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