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Callie

Callie Rocking in a chintz platform rocker, Wearing a patio dress, Day after day she hums a song, “With someone like you.” Through the window she watches, He left her far too soon, Dust and cobwebs around her gather, She hums and rocks “With someone like you. I’d like to leave it all behind.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/10/2016 12:37:00 AM
hi Sunlight. this is sad....
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 8/10/2016 3:36:00 PM
Once in a while I have to sing a sad song. Thanks for dipping in.
Date: 8/9/2016 7:09:00 PM
Yes, loneliness is very depressing. Sad write, Sunlite.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 8/11/2016 9:02:00 AM
I try not to critique poems in the comment section. I think it's rude and disrespectful.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 8/10/2016 3:35:00 PM
Thanks for your comment, Daniel. Was it decent poetry?

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