Call Me Grandfather

I chime on a dime, I'll stand the test of time, long after you are gone 12/22/19

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 12/28/2019 12:15:00 AM

Cool poem, Alexis. Last one standing, eh. Unless Father time has a grandfather clause, which makes it tick-tock okay to kill rhymes. lol! Sharp wit Monoku! Love and peace forever.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/24/2019 8:24:00 PM

Enjoyed this one, though I admit I almost didn't get it. Love that 'chime on a dime!' Thanks, Alexis! :) gw

Sandra Adams

Date: 12/22/2019 4:31:00 PM

good one for the contest Alexis...i always loved grandfather clocks, my brother had one and it stopped working...my niece placed his urn in it and it started chiming... best wishes.... hugs