Patrick Edward Tarpey Poet Free verse

California

Big Bear I met her there
She was in the snow.
San Clemente
By the sea
Her hair golden brown.
Arcata
I like her,
Her redwoods running free.

from the book The Brooklyn Sunflower by author Patrick Edward Tarpey

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Heidi Sands March 18, 2021 at 4:59 AM Reminds me of going to Big Bear California and when I used to live near there. Congratulations for your book publishing too :) Patrick Edward Tarpey March 18, 2021 at 10:32 AM Heidi, Thank you! Yes, Big Bear California!

Harry Horsman February 5, 2021 at 7:15 PM Vivid poetry, Patrick love it. Stay Safe..Harry Patrick Edward Tarpey February 6, 2021 at 8:07 AM Thank you Harry for your kind words!

Akkina Downing February 1, 2021 at 1:11 PM I’m not sure I would sit still seeing a big bear. Probably running for my life with the loudest scream somebody help me... Lol! Your book sounds like a great one to read. Patrick Edward Tarpey February 2, 2021 at 6:11 PM Ha! you are funny Akkina! Thank you for the warm compliment.