Calico Leaves

Blotted 
Seasonal leaves
Vicissitudes of hues
A kaleidoscope canopy
Beauty
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Culverhouse Avatar
November 3, 2009 at 10:28 AM
nicley penned
Fraser Avatar
October 31, 2009 at 8:34 AM
All i can see is colours, colours and colours >> nice >> James
Gass Avatar
October 31, 2009 at 6:32 AM
Beautiful images and phrasing in this Cinquain, Raul! The title is lovely. Love, Robin
Brown Avatar
October 27, 2009 at 3:39 AM
Beautiful Raul. Love, Carol
Oremraeh Avatar
October 26, 2009 at 6:30 PM
Stunning word-painting
Golden Avatar
October 26, 2009 at 3:56 PM
Lovely cinquain, Raul! I see the picture that you so effectively create with your skilled pen! Hugs, Donna
Richards Avatar
October 26, 2009 at 3:41 PM
A kaleidoscope canopy...what a great description!!! Lovely cinquain! ~ Carrie
Sheart Avatar
October 26, 2009 at 11:31 AM
Great visual Raul! Love the 4th line. A lovely fall Cinquain. Truly enjoyed. Thanks for sharing. Smile, Love Light Truth Patricia
Kendrick Avatar
October 26, 2009 at 10:48 AM
Like a calico cat. Nice comparison. Keep writing. Sara
Haick Avatar
October 26, 2009 at 10:29 AM
Thanks for the joy you share in your Cinquain! This is my favorite time of year! Peace, Audrey
Culverhouse Avatar
October 26, 2009 at 10:18 AM
nicley penned, I like it!
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