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Calico Leaves

Blotted Seasonal leaves Vicissitudes of hues A kaleidoscope canopy Beauty

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/3/2009 10:28:00 AM

nicley penned

James Fraser

Date: 10/31/2009 8:34:00 AM

All i can see is colours, colours and colours >> nice >> James

Robin L. Gass

Date: 10/31/2009 6:32:00 AM

Beautiful images and phrasing in this Cinquain, Raul! The title is lovely. Love, Robin

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/27/2009 3:39:00 AM

Beautiful Raul. Love, Carol

Ra Oremraeh

Date: 10/26/2009 6:30:00 PM

Stunning word-painting

Donna Golden

Date: 10/26/2009 3:56:00 PM

Lovely cinquain, Raul! I see the picture that you so effectively create with your skilled pen! Hugs, Donna

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/26/2009 3:41:00 PM

A kaleidoscope canopy...what a great description!!! Lovely cinquain! ~ Carrie

P Sheart

Date: 10/26/2009 11:31:00 AM

Great visual Raul! Love the 4th line. A lovely fall Cinquain. Truly enjoyed. Thanks for sharing. Smile, Love Light Truth Patricia

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/26/2009 10:48:00 AM

Like a calico cat. Nice comparison. Keep writing. Sara

Audrey Haick

Date: 10/26/2009 10:29:00 AM

Thanks for the joy you share in your Cinquain! This is my favorite time of year! Peace, Audrey

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/26/2009 10:18:00 AM

nicley penned, I like it!