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Cali Girl

Former Miss California, my Cali girl She’s beautiful inside and out Her magnetic personality: bright sunny smiles so attracts me Cali girl takes me riding when the surf is high I’ve fallen into the water of her warm Pacifico charms She’s so gorgeous from the outside going in Politely rejected Stanford, said she didn’t feel the need to be elite Moves to her own samba rhythm waves of the beach, my Cali intellectual gypsy She’s a down-to-earth woman, no Rodeo Drive mannequin snob My Cali girl don’t run with the Beverly Hills crowd She’s so winsome on the inside moving out Gave her beauty crown to the runner-up, said just winning it all, that was enough Then drove her 82' Mustang into anonymity, parked her beautiful self in a lounge chair next to me Our virgin conversation gave her the vibe to unwind, and let her hair down Just be herself ... with no paparazzi expectations hanging around She’s truly beautiful inside and out So sweet of her to open the door, allowing me into her world Now I’m her city Motown guy, and she’s my country Cali girl Dedicated to my beloved friend, Kee

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 7/18/2017 12:46:00 PM
Such a sweet guy you are dear Freddie. And a lovely tribute to your Cali girl :)
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Date: 7/18/2017 8:30:00 AM
Hi Freddie, What a good write this is. I enjoyed it from the beginning until the end. I agree with Victor , your descriptions were spot on :-)Alexis
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Date: 7/17/2017 4:17:00 PM
A lovely write Freddie, Hope she liked the rhythm and blues..
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Date: 7/17/2017 1:43:00 PM
Not quite what I expect, I'm so glad to say. Sweet write Freddie...
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