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Calculating Canaries

So many numbers 
Being tossed around~

And all I am counting is
Missing colour and sound





9/30/2019

anxietybirdenvironmentlight verse

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Michelle Faulkner

October 4, 2019 at 4:10 PM

What would the world be without color and sound? I often take for granted, thanks for reminding me to appreciate it!

Gershon Wolf

October 2, 2019 at 2:16 PM

I see SIX; I really do. No tricks, gimmicks, nothing. 2 + 2 = 6 infer-red! There you go... :) gw

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 3, 2019 at 7:26 AM

You made me double check, it's 6 or less... Phew! ;D, but did you like it? xomo

Jeff Connelly

September 30, 2019 at 6:34 PM

A very nice juxtaposition of pure numbers with only color and sound. Very visual for me Maureen. If you know the number of birds just by color and sound why would you need the logical number count to determine what you already know intuitively. I like this very much Maureen. Thank you.

Jeff Connelly

October 1, 2019 at 11:58 AM

Just returning the favor Maureen. I've written some poems from your comments. Thanks so much.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 1, 2019 at 8:44 AM

My friend you deliver the most sating comments on my poetry. Thank you eternally. xomo