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Calculating Canaries

So many numbers Being tossed around~ And all I am counting is Missing colour and sound 9/30/2019

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Date: 10/4/2019 4:10:00 PM
What would the world be without color and sound? I often take for granted, thanks for reminding me to appreciate it!
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Date: 10/2/2019 2:16:00 PM
I see SIX; I really do. No tricks, gimmicks, nothing. 2 + 2 = 6 infer-red! There you go... :) gw
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/3/2019 7:26:00 AM
You made me double check, it's 6 or less... Phew! ;D, but did you like it? xomo
Date: 9/30/2019 6:34:00 PM
A very nice juxtaposition of pure numbers with only color and sound. Very visual for me Maureen. If you know the number of birds just by color and sound why would you need the logical number count to determine what you already know intuitively. I like this very much Maureen. Thank you.
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 10/1/2019 11:58:00 AM
Just returning the favor Maureen. I've written some poems from your comments. Thanks so much.
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/1/2019 8:44:00 AM
My friend you deliver the most sating comments on my poetry. Thank you eternally. xomo
Date: 9/30/2019 12:41:00 PM
This was fun, we can always count on you my friend.
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/1/2019 8:41:00 AM
Tee hee ;), Thank you dear! xomo
Date: 9/30/2019 12:12:00 PM
Victor's abacus should help but if not, count on your toes!!! LOL Love from T.O. XOXO
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/1/2019 8:41:00 AM
Lol! oh wait there's a song "fingers and toes, fingers and toes, forty things we share..." HUGS my dear sweet Jack! xomo

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