Cakewalk

October held 10 family birthdays
all between 4 houses on Troy Street.
Each night after dinner we
set out on our walk for cake.
Aunt Lory’s house was rum
Aunt Josies, buttercream frosted white,
and Aunt Lu’s lemon, bright yellow, rich and moist
could made her St. Joseph’s statue drool.

We’d gather around the birthday boy perched on a chair, 
while us cousins stood, shoulder to shoulder,
eagerly waiting for the last note of the song to be sung.
I stood eye level to the burning numbered candles,
mesmerized by their melting wax dripping 
down the sides like sap from a tree.
Their light, drunk on sugar, danced wildly 
across our hungry faces.

Then with one large blow the room went black.
In those few seconds Darkness, like eternity
steals all their faces from my sight.
The room frozen, suspended precariously between
feast and fear, grief and gratitude, love and loss.
Lights return to applause as the knife cuts deep into the center.
Wishes like prayers are sent rising as curls of smoke
through a chimney, up, up to places far away.

Paper plates of sugar splendor are passed down and devoured.
We didn’t realize then, just silly girls with frost covered lips,
how everything of importance in this world fit at the end of that fork. 
With full bellies our good-byes are said on porch lite steps.
And the moon, like a lantern, radiant in the Autumn sky
illuminates our way home till our next walk,
Aunt Mary’s luscious chocolate layer cake.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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August 1, 2012 at 9:31 PM
Ann, I noticed,, you don't have a poetry list.. are you a new poet here on the soup? I was hoping to log on tonight, and read a few of your poems.. I was really happy to hear from you.. It's always nice to see new and old poets offering support on my poetry... about your poem... I'm an October baby myself. My family is large, I think we actually have over 7 October babies.. I found myself walking with you through these family gatherings.. Sometimes life can seem so epic. and still we are covered with sweetness. The last 15 lines in your poem, drew me with sad goodbyes.. waiting for new ones at the end... MMMM did you say..." chocolate layer cake " love your poem...xox~LINDA
Ricci Avatar
August 3, 2012 at 6:21 PM
Thank you Linda. Your support is inspirational! I write on and off. I'd like to be more disciplined, but life gets in the way. I intend to list more while I have some time in August and read more from such wonderful poets as yourself.
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August 1, 2012 at 3:26 PM
This is special Ann..."at the end of that fork" is absolutely lovely...good work. BG
Ricci Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 4:47 PM
This started as a sweet ode to a childhood memory, but the further I got into it the more I felt the lost. Most of those relatives are gone, including cousins. Thank you so much for appreciating it.
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