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Cake of Surprises

Take a bucketful of heartache                                  A measure of a kiss......................                               Mix in a smidgeon of a promise....                             You will get this ...............................                               It is  a cake of surprises .............                                 Served up with a sauce of delight                                      Eat  it with caution ................                                         Love is just out of sight...

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Date: 1/14/2013 3:38:00 PM
Seren I too do not like cake, but love this...David
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/14/2013 5:40:00 PM
thanks David.
Date: 1/14/2013 9:34:00 AM
i bet you are,, when one reads this again again and again.. it just gets better,,, you are surely the poet of surprise.. this is lovely Seren....
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Date: 1/14/2013 10:35:00 AM
awww Harry, your so kind with your praise.. Thanks .....Seren
Date: 1/14/2013 1:33:00 AM
This is good, I don't like cake but this is good xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/14/2013 5:31:00 AM
Well i didnt do a shape just an outline. Lol thanks Mandy. ..

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