Cake of Surprises

Take a bucketful of heartache
                                 A measure of a kiss......................
                              Mix in a smidgeon of a promise....
                            You will get this ...............................

                              It is  a cake of surprises .............
                                Served up with a sauce of delight 
                                    Eat  it with caution ................
                                        Love is just out of sight...
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Williams Avatar
January 14, 2013 at 3:38 PM
Seren I too do not like cake, but love this...David
Roberts Avatar
January 14, 2013 at 5:40 PM
thanks David.
Horsman Avatar
January 14, 2013 at 9:34 AM
i bet you are,, when one reads this again again and again.. it just gets better,,, you are surely the poet of surprise.. this is lovely Seren....
Roberts Avatar
January 14, 2013 at 10:35 AM
awww Harry, your so kind with your praise.. Thanks .....Seren
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 14, 2013 at 1:33 AM
This is good, I don't like cake but this is good xx
Roberts Avatar
January 14, 2013 at 5:31 AM
Well i didnt do a shape just an outline. Lol thanks Mandy. ..
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