Cake and Eat It

cake & eat it

bored with the 
relationship s/he’s in
but not wanting to leave
the positive aspects,
thinking s/he’s too old to
start again &
been there before anyway---
with a pattern s/he knows 
all too well
looming just over the horizon,
s/he takes the plunge,
not looking before s/he leaps &
not wanting to think about
the significant other
who may be at home
wondering, waiting &
wanting to get to the bottom of
the change in 
habits (all that are noticeable &
s/he thinks they aren’t),
the change in his/her look
(clearly prepping for somebody 
else & the audience at home
ain’t buyin’ that its them),
the change in the craving for
attention from the one s/he lives
with &
of course, the list goes on---
s/he starts to look outside the
cell, refusing to leave on her/his 
own, 
desiring &
desiring &
burning up
inside with
sheer want, until
s/he comes across 
someone that s/he cannot have,
someone who says s/he’s got to 
choose between the stability of
boredom at home or
a new trip, entirely,
someone who reveals the obvious in
plain English---
“cannot have your cake & eat it
too.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 12/15/2012 11:54:00 PM
Far too many think they can have their cake and eat it too! And far too many willing to indulge regardless of the consequences. Another great poem andrew
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Andrew Delapruch
Date: 12/16/2012 12:15:00 AM
@ShazCheesman. Thanks for taking the time to read my work---glad you can relate!
Date: 12/11/2012 4:52:00 AM
Damn....I'm glad I stopped by...this is one hell of a write!!! Excellent!!! A fav
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Date: 12/16/2012 12:16:00 AM
@Pace G INK-U-SCRIPT. Thanks for continuing to read man!
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