Cabin In the Woods

Your flannel shirt hung on the back of the chair
Your boots sit on the floor
I walk to the window,breathe in the air
How could I ask for more?
The sun is rising on the mountains below
The whipper wills they sing
The little cabin was built with love among the pines and streams.
I feel your arms around me
my robe falls to the floor.
This little cabin in the woods...
Awwww who could ask for more ??
Fifty years together,our love has never changed.
Our little cabin in the woods
where we heard our children sing.
They're all grown up and moved away,
to their places right down the road.
Their own little cabin in the woods
Where they'll watch their children grown.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 2/3/2014 12:33:00 AM
This is just Beautiful... so well written and beautiful... love the sentiment.. :)
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Agnes Bugeja
Date: 2/3/2014 12:48:00 AM
thank you Debbie,I appreciate your opinion....
Date: 2/1/2014 8:13:00 PM
Just lovely.
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Agnes Bugeja
Date: 2/2/2014 11:38:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed it Carolina.
Date: 2/1/2014 5:00:00 PM
A Rustic View And Beautiful Her Brush ~ 'Fifty Years Together, Our Love Has Never Changed:' What Dreams Are Made Of, When Beauty Is All We See ~ When A Poet Shall Swim, Inside, Then I Know She Belongs Amid Faves ~ My Love, Always, John
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Agnes Bugeja
Date: 2/2/2014 11:39:00 PM
Thank you so much Johnny...hugs,Agnes
Date: 2/1/2014 10:26:00 AM
Agnes you capture the passage of time very well..David
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Agnes Bugeja
Date: 2/1/2014 12:05:00 PM
Thank you David. Glad you enjoyed it
Date: 2/1/2014 7:27:00 AM
Fabulous poem . Put that robe back on this minute . You'll catch your death in this weather . lol Inspirational , Thank you
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Agnes Bugeja
Date: 2/1/2014 7:36:00 AM
good morning Darren..and you're right. Its a good morning to keep that robe on. brrrrrr.....thanks for stoppong by
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