Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Monoku

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- Bygone Time -

~ it brings tears - every ripple I wrote in my diary ~






14.02.2023
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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A Ripple To Me Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: JCB Brul
1st place in the contest

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Aysha Nuwas February 21, 2023 at 11:21 PM This brings tears to me too, lovely. Anne-Lise Andresen February 22, 2023 at 3:10 AM - Thank you for your comment, Aysha :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich February 20, 2023 at 3:34 PM Well done, Sunshine. Congrats

Phyllis Babcock February 20, 2023 at 9:18 AM Congrats on your first place finish. Well written. love phyl

Jennifer Proxenos February 19, 2023 at 6:18 AM I still have 2 autograph books in the bottom drawer of my desk and every time I come across it I read a few of the messages, they bring back happy memories of my school years. I can imagine your diary does much the same for you. LOVE AND HUGS, Jennifer.

Christuraj Alex February 18, 2023 at 9:14 PM Beautifully written. Congratulations!

Ann Peck February 18, 2023 at 3:01 PM Oh, I agree with that, Sunshine. Also, every song we sang...A beautiful monoku. Congratulations!

Beata Agustin February 17, 2023 at 8:01 PM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Michael Tor February 17, 2023 at 7:50 PM Wonderfully written and a first place finish. Well done...

Valsa George February 17, 2023 at 7:36 PM Rousing sad thoughts. Congratulations on your first place win Smile ! Blessings !

Tania Kitchin February 17, 2023 at 7:05 PM Anne-Lise, love it, congratulations on your first place win!

Evelyn Judy Buehler February 17, 2023 at 1:28 PM Evocative and lovely, Anne-Lise. :) Anne-Lise Andresen February 22, 2023 at 3:11 AM - Thank you for your comment, Evelyn :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith February 17, 2023 at 1:07 PM Congratulations on your win. A lovely write/book picture. I can feel the tears. Have a great day/weekend...............

Gershon Wolf February 17, 2023 at 1:05 PM Precious!! Way to go on your first place win, Anne-Lise!

Janice Canerdy February 17, 2023 at 10:13 AM Very touching, Anne-Lise. CONGRATS on your win. Janice

Sam Kauffman February 17, 2023 at 9:41 AM This I love this, Anne-Lise. All the dreams and disappointments of a young girl or woman penned in her diary brought to light again. You bring such poignancy to this experience of childhood. Congratulations on your win!

Kim Rodrigues February 15, 2023 at 6:22 PM Aww…so sweet. I had to get rid of my childhood pages…way to negative. Now, if I ever have to write like that, I immediately destroy. God bless you, sweet one!

Frederic Parker February 15, 2023 at 4:39 PM A visual keepsake from the heart Anne-Lise Andresen February 22, 2023 at 3:11 AM - Thank you for your comment, Frederic :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich February 15, 2023 at 4:18 PM A very unique type of ripple. WELL done.

Sara Kendrick February 15, 2023 at 1:42 PM Ahh!! I can feel the emotion in this one. Way to go. Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Thanks for sharing and for the visit to my page. Sara

Fin Chuuk February 15, 2023 at 7:31 AM Fabulously done. :)

Victor Buhagiar February 15, 2023 at 1:56 AM This is an excellent Monoku, Anne Lise. Luck with the contest.

Joanna Daniel February 14, 2023 at 10:23 PM Lovely, Anne-lise:) your ripples are touching indeed:)

Panagiota Romios February 14, 2023 at 3:19 PM How touching, Sunshine. I used to write it one, too. Today, Poetry Soup is my diary. There’s some cake for you at my site, Happy Valentine’s Day. Panagiota