White Sage Poet Free verse

Bye, But You Still Live On In Me

You left too soon
To live by the moon
To dine with the sun
And smile with the morn
Am left now, with double heart
I know you left by me, your heart
I have now, double feelings
I have now, double emotions
Two voices, to enhance my screaming
And I'll accept that, and take care of it with caution
I will get angry twice as normal
Smile twice as normal
Love with such strength which doesn't exist in the world
Care so much, even if my heart can't afford
You'll live on in me
Forever am you, and you are me
I will answer to your name, I'll glee-
As you do glee, walk like you walk
Talk like you talk
smile like you do smile
live by your style
Because you are me, and am you

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Andrea Dietrich January 24, 2016 at 4:31 PM a very interesting. As if living with a ghost!! I enjoyed the read, White Sage. White Sage January 24, 2016 at 4:42 PM thanks Andrea...she's not a ghost anymore....she's an immortal carved into memories...I really appreciate your comments

Kelli White January 24, 2016 at 2:55 PM I love this. I am you. You are me. Such is how was meant to be. White Sage January 24, 2016 at 4:15 PM thanks Kelli, am glad you like it

Andrea Dietrich January 15, 2016 at 6:36 PM very interesting one, White sage! Provocative. White Sage January 15, 2016 at 6:48 PM thanks Andrea

Nette Onclaud January 15, 2016 at 10:03 AM how beautifully sad, WS... images run deep, wow!..huggs White Sage January 15, 2016 at 10:31 AM thanks Nette, i appreciate your comment

Anne-Lise Andresen January 15, 2016 at 6:35 AM - Lovely written, W.S. :) - Best wishes for a beautiful weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :) White Sage January 15, 2016 at 10:22 AM thanks so much Anne

Emile Pinet January 14, 2016 at 5:12 PM One wish, one heart, one love...feelings that float within our conscious minds and land gently within our hearts. Emile. White Sage January 14, 2016 at 6:10 PM thanks Emile...i appreciate your comment

Liam Mcdaid January 14, 2016 at 2:31 PM its the unity that bonds beyond destiny beautifully painted deeply wishing you a blessed weekend ahead White Sage January 14, 2016 at 2:40 PM thanks Liam...I appreciate your comment

Kp Nunez January 14, 2016 at 10:29 AM This is a wonderful way you express love even the beloved is gone. Lovely...:-) White Sage January 14, 2016 at 11:20 AM thanks Kim, i appreciate your comment

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis January 14, 2016 at 9:04 AM Something of an ode that swells with love. May all your days remain that way; lovely. White Sage January 14, 2016 at 10:46 AM thanks Iris...

Demetrios Trifiatis January 14, 2016 at 8:31 AM Oneness achieved, love never dies! Majestic m friend, W.S.! White Sage January 14, 2016 at 10:45 AM thanks Demetrios...the heart's kind of immortal, it always live on in another

Legendary Legend January 14, 2016 at 4:57 AM hmmm......written well. White Sage January 14, 2016 at 10:44 AM thanks... White Sage January 14, 2016 at 10:43 AM

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 14, 2016 at 2:48 AM White sage, lovely message you have here.. touched and thought.. =`) enjoyed the read.. You did great with your collab with Daliah.. keep em up~Olive Eloisa =`) White Sage January 14, 2016 at 10:40 AM thanks Olive, Dalia is lovely and excellent, having a colaboration with her's great

Justin Bordner January 14, 2016 at 2:15 AM I will burn like you burn, I will pray like you pray, and I will love like you love, doubled are my heartbeats...this is what your poem makes me feel and know White Sage...J.A.B. White Sage January 14, 2016 at 10:38 AM thanks Justin...i appreciate your comment

Lin Lane January 13, 2016 at 3:44 PM tell me, sage, is it worse to have two hearts, or only half of one? I've never read a poem in which someone has taken the heart of another, I assume through death? If so, it's even more beautiful than at first glance. Very nice. Lin Lane January 13, 2016 at 4:32 PM That's a lovely reply, and one I agree with completely ;) White Sage January 13, 2016 at 4:28 PM having half heart is worse, the emotions will be pieces and not piece...but two heart, is lovely especially when the two hearts are exactly one before the departure of the other...two heart's a great strength