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Bye, But You Still Live On In Me

You left too soon
To live by the moon
To dine with the sun
And smile with the morn
Am left now, with double heart
I know you left by me, your heart
I have now, double feelings
I have now, double emotions
Two voices, to enhance my screaming
And I'll accept that, and take care of it with caution
I will get angry twice as normal
Smile twice as normal
Love with such strength which doesn't exist in the world
Care so much, even if my heart can't afford
You'll live on in me
Forever am you, and you are me
I will answer to your name, I'll glee-
As you do glee, walk like you walk
Talk like you talk
smile like you do smile
live by your style
Because you are me, and am you

Copyright © White Sage | Year Posted 2016

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/24/2016 4:31:00 PM a very interesting. As if living with a ghost!! I enjoyed the read, White Sage. Login to Reply White Sage Date: 1/24/2016 4:42:00 PM thanks Andrea...she's not a ghost anymore....she's an immortal carved into memories...I really appreciate your comments

Kelli White Date: 1/24/2016 2:55:00 PM I love this. I am you. You are me. Such is how was meant to be. Login to Reply White Sage Date: 1/24/2016 4:15:00 PM thanks Kelli, am glad you like it

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/15/2016 6:36:00 PM very interesting one, White sage! Provocative. Login to Reply White Sage Date: 1/15/2016 6:48:00 PM thanks Andrea

Nette Onclaud Date: 1/15/2016 10:03:00 AM how beautifully sad, WS... images run deep, wow!..huggs Login to Reply White Sage Date: 1/15/2016 10:31:00 AM thanks Nette, i appreciate your comment

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/15/2016 6:35:00 AM - Lovely written, W.S. :) - Best wishes for a beautiful weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply White Sage Date: 1/15/2016 10:22:00 AM thanks so much Anne

Emile Pinet Date: 1/14/2016 5:12:00 PM One wish, one heart, one love...feelings that float within our conscious minds and land gently within our hearts. Emile. Login to Reply White Sage Date: 1/14/2016 6:10:00 PM thanks Emile...i appreciate your comment

Liam Mcdaid Date: 1/14/2016 2:31:00 PM its the unity that bonds beyond destiny beautifully painted deeply wishing you a blessed weekend ahead Login to Reply White Sage Date: 1/14/2016 2:40:00 PM thanks Liam...I appreciate your comment

Kp Nunez Date: 1/14/2016 10:29:00 AM This is a wonderful way you express love even the beloved is gone. Lovely...:-) Login to Reply White Sage Date: 1/14/2016 11:20:00 AM thanks Kim, i appreciate your comment

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis Date: 1/14/2016 9:04:00 AM Something of an ode that swells with love. May all your days remain that way; lovely. Login to Reply White Sage Date: 1/14/2016 10:46:00 AM thanks Iris...

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 1/14/2016 8:31:00 AM Oneness achieved, love never dies! Majestic m friend, W.S.! Login to Reply White Sage Date: 1/14/2016 10:45:00 AM thanks Demetrios...the heart's kind of immortal, it always live on in another

Legendary Legend Date: 1/14/2016 4:57:00 AM hmmm......written well. Login to Reply White Sage Date: 1/14/2016 10:44:00 AM thanks... White Sage Date: 1/14/2016 10:43:00 AM

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 1/14/2016 2:48:00 AM White sage, lovely message you have here.. touched and thought.. =`) enjoyed the read.. You did great with your collab with Daliah.. keep em up~Olive Eloisa =`) Login to Reply White Sage Date: 1/14/2016 10:40:00 AM thanks Olive, Dalia is lovely and excellent, having a colaboration with her's great

Justin Bordner Date: 1/14/2016 2:15:00 AM I will burn like you burn, I will pray like you pray, and I will love like you love, doubled are my heartbeats...this is what your poem makes me feel and know White Sage...J.A.B. Login to Reply White Sage Date: 1/14/2016 10:38:00 AM thanks Justin...i appreciate your comment

Lin Lane Date: 1/13/2016 3:44:00 PM tell me, sage, is it worse to have two hearts, or only half of one? I've never read a poem in which someone has taken the heart of another, I assume through death? If so, it's even more beautiful than at first glance. Very nice. Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 1/13/2016 4:32:00 PM That's a lovely reply, and one I agree with completely ;) White Sage Date: 1/13/2016 4:28:00 PM having half heart is worse, the emotions will be pieces and not piece...but two heart, is lovely especially when the two hearts are exactly one before the departure of the other...two heart's a great strength