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Bye-bye Mr Winter

So long, Mr. Winter We welcome, Miss Spring When all snow melts And birds all sing When buds become flowers And trees grow green When bees make honey And help the queen When the waters warm And so, the breeze The boats will sail All across the seas From over the seas The monarchs will fly And soon we'll say Mr. Winter- "Bye-bye"

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Date: 2/2/2025 3:44:00 PM
Nicely penned poem, Charles. I wish your words will come true sooner than later. Hurry!
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Date: 2/2/2025 5:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go..I agree it will be nice to see spring but not the heat of summer. Sara K
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Date: 2/1/2025 9:38:00 PM
I fully agree with your message about So long, Mr. Winter, and welcoming Miss Spring. Congratulations on your win in my contest.
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Date: 1/31/2025 3:08:00 AM
- I wish it was true, Charlie :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 1/31/2025 2:06:00 AM
Great poem Charles you were unconstricted by the 4x4x4x4 format, congratulations
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Date: 1/28/2025 5:56:00 PM
Can't wait Charles for the coming of Spring. March is my favorite month cause I know April is after it lol. Hope you are well my friend really enjoyed the poem you wrote about when you were growing up in the 7o's. God bless you my friend...
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Date: 1/28/2025 2:52:00 AM
Yes winter has been like an un-welcome guest this year. Miss spring knows how to behave with sweetness and light. Cheers, SuZ
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Date: 1/27/2025 3:23:00 AM
Charlie, a sweet Spring poem, nicely penned. I am looking forward to winter ending.
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Charles Messina
Date: 1/27/2025 8:32:00 AM
Tania, thank you so much! Yes, it can't come soon enough for me! Nice to see you...
Date: 1/26/2025 7:30:00 PM
Cool poem, Charlie, love the short lines:)
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Charles Messina
Date: 1/27/2025 12:54:00 AM
Thank you so much, Jo! It's for a contest 4-stanzas, 4-lines, 4-words :)
Date: 1/26/2025 8:38:00 AM
What a lovely Spring write you have here. Spring will be here soon. Great Ending... Have a blessed day as you write away..................
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Charles Messina
Date: 1/27/2025 12:52:00 AM
Hi Paula, Spring couldn't come any sooner for me...brrrr. Thank you so much! Blessings my dear friend.
Date: 1/26/2025 5:36:00 AM
Is this for the 4x4 contest? As good as any I've seen. Yeah spring still a few months away but what a brutal January it's been
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Charles Messina
Date: 1/26/2025 6:23:00 AM
Hey Tom, yes, it is for the contest. Thank you! This year seems to be the coldest it's been in a decade. Stay safe and warm, my friend.

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