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Bye-bye Mr Winter

So long, Mr. Winter 
We welcome, Miss Spring 
When all snow melts 
And birds all sing 

When buds become flowers 
And trees grow green 
When bees make honey 
And help the queen 

When the waters warm 
And so, the breeze 
The boats will sail 
All across the seas 

From over the seas 
The monarchs will fly 
And soon we'll say 
Mr. Winter- "Bye-bye"

Copyright © Charles Messina | Year Posted 2025

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David Fisher Date: 2/2/2025 3:44:00 PM Nicely penned poem, Charles. I wish your words will come true sooner than later. Hurry! Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 2/2/2025 5:48:00 AM Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go..I agree it will be nice to see spring but not the heat of summer. Sara K Login to Reply

Miranda Hawley Date: 2/1/2025 9:38:00 PM I fully agree with your message about So long, Mr. Winter, and welcoming Miss Spring. Congratulations on your win in my contest. Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/31/2025 3:08:00 AM - I wish it was true, Charlie :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs Login to Reply

Terry Miller Date: 1/31/2025 2:06:00 AM Great poem Charles you were unconstricted by the 4x4x4x4 format, congratulations Login to Reply

Michael Tor Date: 1/28/2025 5:56:00 PM Can't wait Charles for the coming of Spring. March is my favorite month cause I know April is after it lol. Hope you are well my friend really enjoyed the poem you wrote about when you were growing up in the 7o's. God bless you my friend... Login to Reply

Suzanne Delaney Date: 1/28/2025 2:52:00 AM Yes winter has been like an un-welcome guest this year. Miss spring knows how to behave with sweetness and light. Cheers, SuZ Login to Reply

Tania Kitchin Date: 1/27/2025 3:23:00 AM Charlie, a sweet Spring poem, nicely penned. I am looking forward to winter ending. Login to Reply Charles Messina Date: 1/27/2025 8:32:00 AM Tania, thank you so much! Yes, it can't come soon enough for me! Nice to see you...

Joanna Daniel Date: 1/26/2025 7:30:00 PM Cool poem, Charlie, love the short lines:) Login to Reply Charles Messina Date: 1/27/2025 12:54:00 AM Thank you so much, Jo! It's for a contest 4-stanzas, 4-lines, 4-words :)

Paula Goldsmith Date: 1/26/2025 8:38:00 AM What a lovely Spring write you have here. Spring will be here soon. Great Ending... Have a blessed day as you write away.................. Login to Reply Charles Messina Date: 1/27/2025 12:52:00 AM Hi Paula, Spring couldn't come any sooner for me...brrrr. Thank you so much! Blessings my dear friend.

Tom Woody Date: 1/26/2025 5:36:00 AM Is this for the 4x4 contest? As good as any I've seen. Yeah spring still a few months away but what a brutal January it's been Login to Reply Charles Messina Date: 1/26/2025 6:23:00 AM Hey Tom, yes, it is for the contest. Thank you! This year seems to be the coldest it's been in a decade. Stay safe and warm, my friend.