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Bye-Bye-Blues

I feel like a STAR Like a giant Super-Nova I believe them-ole-blues Is fin-al-ly ovaahh! So let's get up and DANCE A lee-dle Bossa-Nova An-if-ya-don-know-how I'll just have t'SHOW-ya!

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Francine Roberts

Date: 4/11/2010 11:54:00 PM

oh nice, now I have Elvis's Bossa nova Baby running thru my head, probably be there all night, I may just have to call it a night, nice poem Tim

David Byrne

Date: 12/31/2009 3:51:00 AM

good pace-well done

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/26/2009 1:00:00 PM

I'll let you know when I get there ;) Light & Love

Marty Owens

Date: 12/19/2009 7:22:00 PM

Good...I love dancing...you'd probably have to show me this one...lol Enjoyed...Marty

L'Nass Shango

Date: 12/17/2009 8:51:00 AM

I can hear the blues as I read aloud ... Okay for it to be in a poem, but in poets not allowed. Bravo!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/17/2009 6:10:00 AM

Beautiful, fun , full of energy what an amazing write Tim. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 12/16/2009 5:00:00 PM

funny write, keep it flowing

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/16/2009 8:36:00 AM

You not only love good music, good movies, but you dance too??!!!!!!!!!! Would you mind if I cut in this dance? Fun poem, Tim....and glad your sun is shining!~Love, Carrie

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/16/2009 6:23:00 AM

Great news to hear the holiday blues are behind you, Tim. I'm ready for that dance now! Really enjoyed this work, my friend! Love you, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/16/2009 5:24:00 AM

Put my name on your scorecard Tim as I luv to dance as much as I luv to write... great poetry today and gave me a lift so needed... tummy thing still hanging on .. feel like a zip a dee do day day... glad your back full strength... blessings... luv... Linda-Marie.. "Sweetheart"