By Water, Land and Air

(7/5 Trochee Form)

Ships are used for transport, while
speed boats are for fun:
zooming over water while
soaking up the sun.

Those who like to fish might like
slow boats or canoes,
but the thought of fishing just
makes ME want to snooze.

Better is a jet ski for
thrill of jumping waves,
but for practicality,
boats are not my faves.

For convenience, everyone 
has to have a car,
so for us commuters, it’s
the best one by far.

Jogging, hiking, riding bikes:
these are for the wise.
There’s not many doing them.
They spell E X E R C I S E.

For relaxing, there is one
leisurely and grand:
Take the scenic route by train
If you go by land!

If you need to go real far
in less than a day,
it’s by air you have to go.
That’s the only way!

Hang gliding or sky diving
are for feeling free,
but they seem so dangerous.
Those are not for me.

I would like to SAIL the sky
In a big balloon
underneath the dancing stars
and romantic moon.

For Barbara Gorelick's Contest:
Your Favorite Form of Transporation
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Guzzi Avatar
August 9, 2010 at 4:46 PM
Such a nice verse to read to the kids! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
Brown Avatar
August 9, 2010 at 9:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your win in Barbara Gorelick's contest "Favorite Form Of Transportation". Love, Carol
Augustus Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 12:32 PM
I found this completely entertaining and cute! Congratulations on your win and thank you for reading mine!
Devonshire Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 8:12 AM
A well-deserved win, Andrea. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
Richards Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 7:40 AM
You covered a lot of territory with this great poem, Andrea!! You are definitely on a winning streak! Congratulations dear !! Love, Carrie
Kapoor Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 2:43 AM
Great and beautiful write and very well deserving win. You took almost every thing on the canvas of your favorite transpiration and that too so beautifully and so brilliantly. Congrats. Love and best wishes.......Ravindra........Andrea Dietrich
Mehta Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 9:40 PM
Congrats on well deserved win , Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 9:23 PM
Congrats Andrea on your big win in BG's contest with this fabulous write on transportation ... enjoy another great and momentous victory my friend.. with luv..
Gorelick Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 9:15 PM
Loved your poem and congrats..a new form for me..thank you for participating.bg
Mossburg Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 7:13 PM
Hey, good luck on this contest too! I like the lightness of this poem and I especially like the last stanza. I love the moon, stars, and big open sky.
Delacroix Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 2:33 PM
Well done Andrea! good luck in the contest. Best wishes, Caroline.
Chachere Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 1:22 PM
haha, we could all use all of this fun & excercise today. i do every once and a while. but i should more, just to keep shape and healthiness. ~Always&Forever
Austin Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 8:41 AM
Did you see the animated movie where the man tied hundreds of helium filled balloons to his house and sailed up high in the sky? Great write, but I don't favor any of these. I am become a home body. Love, Dave
Walters Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 6:40 AM
Ah! The balloon sounds wonderful! We'd have to do the train first, for my son- a train fanatic then we could board the balloon for blue skies. Lovely writing, fun! Best wishes in the contest! Hugs, kris
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 8:21 PM
I was happy to see this poem in the form you created Andrea, the 7/5 Trochee. You will have to use your form for a contest one day when you have the time. I think it would do well. I enjoyed your poem and I hope it does well in the contest. Bravo! Love, Connie
Byrne Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 7:19 PM
very jet-set!
Sweetheart Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 6:56 PM
This is stupendous Andrea.. what a thrilling piece of poetry.. a definite winner BG will absolutely adore.. good luck my friend.. with luv.. appreciate all your most welcome comments tonight.. luv..
Tideswell Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 6:08 PM
Great poem Andrea, I'm with you on the hang gliding and sky diving... definitely not for me. Good luck in the contest ~ sahron :)
A   Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 5:04 PM
lol, meow meow,,, ha ha ,, enjoyed the cat in the bag joke...Hey where did that kitty (s)kat go haha.. by the way i love your poem,,p..d.
Falotico Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 1:54 PM
You are a wonderful Poet!!! everything is well done and written... Always Michael
Keogh Jr. Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 10:59 AM
Versatility. You have it. Many strive for it. You have it. One of your hidden gifts within your gift, I suspect. Berst wishes, Humbly, Gerard.
Fraser Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 10:02 AM
Wonderful piece on transport Andrea, sure to do well in Barbara's contest >> James
Neels Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 7:08 AM
Hey Andrea, enjoyed your poem on transportation.. best wishes for the contest.. hope your day will be an awesome one, love Wilma
Horsman Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 12:57 AM
excellent entry to the contest, just about covered every thing here, Harry
K. Avatar
August 3, 2010 at 11:39 PM
What a fun poem on transpo Andrea :) hmm hard to choose a favorite form though-- but that last stanza of yours sounds really fun too ;) -- wish you the best in the contest :) btw hope your bakc is feeling better by now? -- hugs, nikko :)
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