Thwelt Di Nwe Poet Free verse

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If I says I love you,
That is love you
"Gentleman"Yeah I says
Night is gradually being softy
Gradually night is being been softy,
That become pretty

If I says you are pretty,
That is you are pretty
"Dear"Yeah I says
The dark is gradually being softy
Gradually the dark os being been softy,
That become away

At the end with that gradually become 
"Existentialism"Yeah I says
If I says you die,
That is you die,of course 

Thwelt Di Nwe

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Anil Deo May 16, 2020 at 6:08 AM Yes, there is GREAT power in our tongue, words, poetry. Awesome thoughts, here, even the word EXISTENTIALISM. But do fix the typos or spelling, as with GRADUALLY: "The dark is geadually being softy." shalom, shalOM from Anil DEO Thwelt Di Nwe May 16, 2020 at 7:33 AM So nice, I appreciate for your Word, The Dark...Of course...