By the Moonlight We

By moonlight we walked 

in December 

her shadow fell across my soul.... 

the wind called her name 

she was with me 

she; 

We strolled the lunar lamp 

the silver love 

and not a clock chimed 

not a soul stirred 

(but she) 

Keith Hunt (c) 2000 


By moonlight we talked 

In December 

His eyes filled my heart 

The wind drove us insane 

He was mine 

He; 

We set the stars on fire 

With the light of love 

And we forgot the hour 

As the clock chimed 

He, 

Kissed me sweetly beneath 

A moon beam… 

Mystic Rose © 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Lindley Avatar
July 16, 2015 at 7:41 PM
Truly exceptional work my friends. A true pleasure to read and ponder. Super 7 but should be able to rate even higher!
Andresen Avatar
May 30, 2015 at 1:31 PM
- Twin poems :) - Beautiful both (7) - I wish you a blessed weekend, Keith - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Anish Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 7:40 PM
Do you know Mystic Rose personally? This is nice romantic work! Let me know what you think of my essay when you can. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
O.J. Hunt Avatar
May 25, 2015 at 12:34 PM
Thanks Matthew. I do not know Rose personally, yet we are like souls. I'm going to try and get around to your essay today. Peace brother! Keith:-)
A  Avatar
May 23, 2015 at 11:56 PM
wonderful. SKAT
Chircop Avatar
May 23, 2015 at 6:27 PM
It fits so beautifully together, A fav to both : )
O.J. Hunt Avatar
May 25, 2015 at 12:36 PM
Thanks Charmaine, it was a great fit. Glad to hear from you again, it's been awhile --- I hope all is well. Keith;-)
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