By the Light of the Silvery Moon

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By The Light Of The Silvery Moon Man seizes the ramble of a wayward moon, Echoes clear its pale look melancholy tune, It lends a trail took before of song and face, Man ambles in the real feel of its sung grace, Glimpse that all the creator has caused to be, Harmony feels to express nature's beauty. 2019 September 26 *1st Place* Any Poem You Want to Write 50 Words or Less ~~Caren Krutsinger

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Date: 9/29/2019 2:33:00 PM
This got First Place WIlliam! I am very happy it did. I thought it was great! Congratulations on your deserving top win! Aloha, Connie xxoo
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Hilo Poet
Date: 9/29/2019 3:02:00 PM
Ah, thanks Connie--the finished Pastoral is 'Creators Caretakers', bit long--when you have time ~ Aloha always William
Date: 9/29/2019 12:05:00 PM
GREAT. BIG CONGRATS to win TOP.
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Date: 9/29/2019 12:50:00 PM
I am appreciative to your kindness ~ Aloha always William
Date: 9/29/2019 11:59:00 AM
William wonderful write and congratulations on your win in the contest!
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Hilo Poet
Date: 9/29/2019 12:49:00 PM
Thanks again for your commentary ~ Aloha always William
Date: 9/29/2019 11:53:00 AM
- Congratulations on your beautiful poem in the harmony of nature, William :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/29/2019 12:47:00 PM
I am very grateful indeed ~ Aloha always William
Date: 9/29/2019 10:44:00 AM
Well expressed, congrats on your top placement.
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Hilo Poet
Date: 9/29/2019 12:46:00 PM
You have my thanks, Richard! ~ Aloha always William
Date: 9/27/2019 10:49:00 AM
Beautiful :)
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Hilo Poet
Date: 9/27/2019 11:08:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 9/27/2019 12:18:00 AM
I wanted this beauty to go on and on but I know the fifty word limit stoped you. This is enchanting my friend! : ) xxoo
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/29/2019 2:29:00 PM
I will look forward to reading it. Let me know when you post it or I could miss it. Mahalo, Connie xxoo
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Date: 9/27/2019 12:36:00 AM
It is an excerpt from an actual lengthy Pastoral in the making -- ASTUTE Connie WTG! ~ Aloha always William
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