William Kelii Kekaula Poet Pastoral

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By the Light of the Silvery Moon

By The Light Of The Silvery Moon

Man seizes the ramble of a wayward moon,
Echoes clear its pale look melancholy tune,
It lends a trail took before of song and face,
Man ambles in the real feel of its sung grace,
Glimpse that all the creator has caused to be,
Harmony feels to express nature's beauty.

2019 September 26

*1st Place*

Any Poem You Want to Write 50 Words or Less
~~Caren Krutsinger

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Connie Marcum Wong September 29, 2019 at 2:33 PM This got First Place WIlliam! I am very happy it did. I thought it was great! Congratulations on your deserving top win! Aloha, Connie xxoo William Kelii Kekaula September 29, 2019 at 3:02 PM Ah, thanks Connie--the finished Pastoral is 'Creators Caretakers', bit long--when you have time ~ Aloha always William

Anisha Dutta September 29, 2019 at 12:05 PM GREAT. BIG CONGRATS to win TOP. William Kelii Kekaula September 29, 2019 at 12:50 PM I am appreciative to your kindness ~ Aloha always William

Constance La France September 29, 2019 at 11:59 AM William wonderful write and congratulations on your win in the contest! William Kelii Kekaula September 29, 2019 at 12:49 PM Thanks again for your commentary ~ Aloha always William

Anne-Lise Andresen September 29, 2019 at 11:53 AM - Congratulations on your beautiful poem in the harmony of nature, William :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) William Kelii Kekaula September 29, 2019 at 12:47 PM I am very grateful indeed ~ Aloha always William

Richard Lamoureux September 29, 2019 at 10:44 AM Well expressed, congrats on your top placement. William Kelii Kekaula September 29, 2019 at 12:46 PM You have my thanks, Richard! ~ Aloha always William

Swetha Vangaveti September 27, 2019 at 10:49 AM Beautiful :) William Kelii Kekaula September 27, 2019 at 11:08 AM Thanks!

Connie Marcum Wong September 27, 2019 at 12:18 AM I wanted this beauty to go on and on but I know the fifty word limit stoped you. This is enchanting my friend! : ) xxoo Connie Marcum Wong September 29, 2019 at 2:29 PM I will look forward to reading it. Let me know when you post it or I could miss it. Mahalo, Connie xxoo William Kelii Kekaula September 27, 2019 at 12:36 AM It is an excerpt from an actual lengthy Pastoral in the making -- ASTUTE Connie WTG! ~ Aloha always William