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By The Eye Of A Fading Sun

Summer scintillating with blossoms of purple and gold, while beneath Umbrella stars, the magic of an enchanting evening takes her breath away Moon glow above waters, verdant trees that fan the expanse of the sky Macaron sweet scented air, a chiffon scarf blows in the wind, she sits at the Edge of the water and prays to the angels above. Please send me someone to Revere and to love. While the gentle waves lap, curl and cover her, he arrives! Love at first sight, that is what it was for her, when she first lay eyes on him. Orbiting her world he smiles and suddenly two celestial bodies meet, Veering towards each other, long forgotten echoes of the past, heard once again Eager to conjoin they fuse like sky and ocean, by the eye of a fading sun.

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Date: 7/3/2024 11:02:00 AM
Great acrostic. Love is eternal.
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Date: 7/3/2024 12:51:00 PM
Dear Jay, love is eternal and forever giving. Glad you stopped by to have a read, take care, keep the Faith,
Date: 7/3/2024 10:35:00 AM
"Veering towards each other, long forgotten echoes of the past, heard once again Eager to conjoin they fuse like sky and ocean, by the eye of a fading sun." -- Love no mystery for those who love -- no better habit to keep as a part of life's never-ending repertoire. Lovely, romantic read. Brava!
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Date: 7/3/2024 12:51:00 PM
Yes life keeps us repeating the sweetness of a love experienced. Perhaps its the soul that goes searching for it time and time again. Thanks for stopping by dear Joe :)
Date: 7/3/2024 2:05:00 AM
Brilliant acrostic. Love conquers all. Your prayers were heard. Hugs.
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Date: 7/3/2024 12:50:00 PM
Thanks for reading Victor, hope all is well :)
Date: 7/2/2024 9:27:00 PM
“They fuse like the sky and ocean by the eye of a fading sun” what a line to end this with. Ho descriptive and imaginative! Brilliant acrostic. I love especially the moonglow above water: so beautiful!!! Pleasure reading you dear rose. Sending you light
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Date: 7/3/2024 12:50:00 PM
The fuse as one beneath a sun that keeps pour out honey, forever as the eye can see Ink, thanks for the comment. Stay Beautiful and Strong, as God intended you to :)
Date: 7/2/2024 8:17:00 PM
elegant use of poetic language...who can 't be thrilled by this work, rose?
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Date: 7/3/2024 12:49:00 PM
So glad you stopped by to enjoy a romantic poem, no matter how old we get Nette, we always appreciate love and all its tender moments

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