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By Park Bench

by park bench autumn leaves ablaze in setting sun posted on May 22, 2018

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/26/2018 12:43:00 AM

I can feel the chill in the air. I am shivering, which means great job,Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/26/2018 8:26:00 AM

Thanks, Caren. Much appreciated.

Mick Talbot

Date: 5/25/2018 3:36:00 AM

Inspirational, you'll see!

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/25/2018 5:04:00 AM

Yes, a lovely moment to write poetry. LOL

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 5/23/2018 7:45:00 PM

I am totally into your haikus. They are the best,

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/23/2018 10:06:00 PM

Thank you so much, Pixie. Lovely comment.

Silent One

Date: 5/23/2018 9:52:00 AM

I see you have written a few haiku, great imagery in this one..

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/23/2018 1:19:00 PM

Thanks, SO. Going through a phase...

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/23/2018 1:51:00 AM

Just see the image Line, late September, leaves starting to show their autuminal beauty. With the sun setting feel the coolness' in the air. Tom

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/23/2018 1:19:00 PM

LOL

Tom Cunningham
Date: 5/23/2018 9:56:00 AM

I'll bring the wine

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/23/2018 9:09:00 AM

You got it, Tom... you and I sitting on the bench. LOL

Susan Ashley

Date: 5/22/2018 10:49:00 PM

Lovely atmospheric imagery, Line. An excellent Haiku!

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/23/2018 9:09:00 AM

Thanks, Susan. Much appreciated.

Eve Roper

Date: 5/22/2018 10:20:00 PM

love the imagery

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/23/2018 9:09:00 AM

Thanks, Eve. Much appreciated.

Lunita Blanca

Date: 5/22/2018 10:07:00 PM

You captured the leaves of autumn with a few words.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/23/2018 9:10:00 AM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Carlos.