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by park bench autumn leaves ablaze in setting sun posted on May 22, 2018

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Date: 5/26/2018 12:43:00 AM
I can feel the chill in the air. I am shivering, which means great job,Line.
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Date: 5/26/2018 8:26:00 AM
Thanks, Caren. Much appreciated.
Date: 5/25/2018 3:36:00 AM
Inspirational, you'll see!
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Date: 5/25/2018 5:04:00 AM
Yes, a lovely moment to write poetry. LOL
Date: 5/23/2018 7:45:00 PM
I am totally into your haikus. They are the best,
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Date: 5/23/2018 10:06:00 PM
Thank you so much, Pixie. Lovely comment.
Date: 5/23/2018 9:52:00 AM
I see you have written a few haiku, great imagery in this one..
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Date: 5/23/2018 1:19:00 PM
Thanks, SO. Going through a phase...
Date: 5/23/2018 1:51:00 AM
Just see the image Line, late September, leaves starting to show their autuminal beauty. With the sun setting feel the coolness' in the air. Tom
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Date: 5/23/2018 1:19:00 PM
LOL
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 5/23/2018 9:56:00 AM
I'll bring the wine
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Date: 5/23/2018 9:09:00 AM
You got it, Tom... you and I sitting on the bench. LOL
Date: 5/22/2018 10:49:00 PM
Lovely atmospheric imagery, Line. An excellent Haiku!
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Date: 5/23/2018 9:09:00 AM
Thanks, Susan. Much appreciated.
Date: 5/22/2018 10:20:00 PM
love the imagery
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Date: 5/23/2018 9:09:00 AM
Thanks, Eve. Much appreciated.
Date: 5/22/2018 10:07:00 PM
You captured the leaves of autumn with a few words.
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Date: 5/23/2018 9:10:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Carlos.