By Degrees

Spilling from the lintel,
a pitcher saves the ice from anonymity.
Rafters creak, the sounds of winter
rattle through the cabin eerily.

Memories of dead and gone,
whistles of wind, the monotony
whispers and drags through the days
like a chilling lament.
Hours burn so slowly,
an ember refusing to ebb,
reminiscences stutter
and fade, no lasting testament.

Evenings and mornings 
now bleed with the same deep regret;
he's losing all feeling,
as cold as cold can get.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Bauer Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 11:17 AM
"an ember refusing to ebb" - now THAT'S poetry! gorgeous language, keith, with a wonderful ending, too...
Bickerstaffe Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 11:29 AM
Thank you my dear! Your kind remarks are much appreciated. Best wishes, Keith
Onclaud Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 4:57 AM
wow, each phrase is filled with such sullen tone wonderfully depicted... beautifully done, keith!..huggs
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