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By Caleb Culverhouse

Jingle bells, Ashley smells Shirley laid an egg The truck had a flat And the deer got away Hunting days, hunting days Deers be aware, Caleb has a sharp eye Packing a hot loaded rifle yeah! **My eleven year old wrote this

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Debra Eckstein

Date: 10/28/2010 2:24:00 PM

Thanks again for the comment . I liked the poem your eleven year old wrote very cute. luv Debra Eckstein

James Fraser

Date: 10/27/2010 4:00:00 AM

He's got a talent Doris, and I'm not against hunting. As long as they follow the path's of the Indians and take what they need and don't kill for the sake of it >> James

Gert W. Knop

Date: 10/25/2010 7:23:00 AM

I am not quite sure that a young boy should go hunting, Doris! I have lived for many years in paua New Guinea and had too shoot pigs and cattle and really did not feel well with this. My uncle was a great hunter and he was shot while being hunting at Normandy, France during WWII by French partisans and what is even more rediculous, he himself was of French origin. Thank you for your kind comments. I had a very good time with my guests!...Gert

John Rhinem

Date: 10/24/2010 7:10:00 PM

Smile ~ I guess that beats a bow & arrow ~ Smile ~ I remember when I was young, I did a lot of hunting also with my uncles; some things just run in the family I suppose; as a matter of fact, I believe its almost deer season now is it not!? ~ Tell Young Caleb Kudos &, "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Night 'Dear, Lovely Doris Culverhouse;' See 'Your Beauty' Upon The Range &, 'Sweet Dreams!'":) ~

John Loving Iii

Date: 10/24/2010 5:27:00 PM

i can tell you right now. this kid is normal. john

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 10/24/2010 5:24:00 PM

Love the poem D. you've been hanging with me too long the funnies have infected you. by the way I can tell you what you can do with me. no I can't. there's people watching. :-) Naughty

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/24/2010 5:18:00 PM

Caleb's writing had me laughing out loud, Doris. Thanks for sharing this with us. He must be quite a boy! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/24/2010 5:07:00 PM

Well his rhyme is perfect and I remember when Grandma Sara made him post a few on her list too so keep them coming Caleb.. enjoyed your little ditty of a poem tonight ...with luv..