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'By-Pass' to 'Surpass' era has begun

Was absolutely healthy, fit and fine With Lifestyle of jogging, gym, laugh & be merry One day ... alarm bell rang at odd time Angiography led to Heart’s Bypass Surgery Situation critical, Heart went under scalpel Reports, X-rays, Veins cut, Grafts inserted Operation successful, Health went on to propel Heart overhauled, new lease of life injected Am absolutely healthy, fit and fine With Lifestyle of diet discipline and stress no more Every day.... alarm bell rings in time For Yoga, Mind-Body-Soul now peaceful, blissful to core Operated, for Others Life's countdown has begun Rejuvenated, to me Era of "By-Pass" to "Surpass" has begun ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Sonnet Rhyme scheme - abab cdcd efef gg HM in Members Contest - How will you Stand by Drakes Eszes By Hitendra Mehta ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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Date: 2/28/2011 2:24:00 PM
Congrats Hitendra on your HM in Drake's contest with this superb entry my friend.. enjoy your very special honor with luv..
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Date: 2/28/2011 12:47:00 PM
Congratulations on the HM win in the contest of Drake, Hitendra
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Date: 2/28/2011 12:28:00 PM
Beautiful job Hitendra. Good to see you honored again. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored success in Drake's inspiring contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/28/2011 12:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Drake's contest Hitendra. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/14/2010 2:18:00 AM
@Sylvia... touchwood was fine ... healthscare in between... but absolutely fine now...Lived Life to full & njoying every moment....Thnx 4 encouraging comments...v sensitive poets need it... Luv/Best wishes always... Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 10/13/2010 3:43:00 PM
Hi Hitendra. Wonderful- and a lesson to us all.I'm so glad you heeded the warning,so many don't.Keep well,and continued peace of mind, body and soul to you.luv June(Sylvia)
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Date: 10/6/2010 9:58:00 PM
@Dr Ram - I am native of Rajasthan. Born & brought up in Mumbai. Can spk Gujarati very well. Also write in Gujarati, Hindi.... @Carol - Thnx for your good words Luv/best wishes always..... Hitendra
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Date: 10/6/2010 11:22:00 AM
Loved reading your poetry today Hitendra. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/5/2010 1:56:00 PM
Thanks for your comments on Karma...rightly said Sanchit Karma, Karam Ki Gati Nyari or Prarabdha. Are you from Gujarat. I am from Vallabh Vidyanagar, (Anand)
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