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Buzzing Wife

on the wake of day ah! I stir her hornet nest - now longing sunset.

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Unseeking Seeker

Date: 7/27/2020 10:28:00 PM

Hahahaha! Needed that laugh!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/27/2020 10:30:00 PM

lol.. Happy to see you laughing...

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 6/25/2020 7:22:00 PM

Bee careful, Jenish, she might sting you. Lovely humorous Senyu. ...Shirley

Jenish Somadas
Date: 6/26/2020 1:02:00 AM

Lol..Before she sting, I flew..lol..

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/25/2020 7:21:00 PM

Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha! Worse even than stirring her 'hairnet!' Ciao, Gershon

Jenish Somadas
Date: 6/26/2020 1:01:00 AM

Lol..Never again..Have a great day Gershon..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/25/2020 3:58:00 PM

cute one, Jenish!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 6/26/2020 1:00:00 AM

Thank you Andrea..

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/25/2020 12:43:00 PM

Hello Jenish Somadas, you should not have disturbed her hornet's nest. Enjoy your day my friend.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 6/26/2020 12:59:00 AM

Lol..Yes Darlene..If I have another day to breath, I will not..

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 6/25/2020 7:32:00 AM

So elegant! So eloquent! So funny! A skilful and intelligent poet of great respect to not offend a buzzing wife! Wonderful work, Jenish! Best regards and blessings.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 6/26/2020 12:58:00 AM

Lol..Thank you Besma.. Not offended.. just stir..lol..