Buzzing Wife

on the wake of day
ah! I stir her hornet nest -
now longing sunset.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Seeker Avatar
July 27, 2020 at 10:28 PM
Hahahaha! Needed that laugh!
Somadas Avatar
July 27, 2020 at 10:30 PM
lol.. Happy to see you laughing...
Hawkins Avatar
June 25, 2020 at 7:22 PM
Bee careful, Jenish, she might sting you. Lovely humorous Senyu. ...Shirley
Somadas Avatar
June 26, 2020 at 1:02 AM
Lol..Before she sting, I flew..lol..
Wolf Avatar
June 25, 2020 at 7:21 PM
Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha! Worse even than stirring her 'hairnet!' Ciao, Gershon
Somadas Avatar
June 26, 2020 at 1:01 AM
Lol..Never again..Have a great day Gershon..
Dietrich Avatar
June 25, 2020 at 3:58 PM
cute one, Jenish!
Somadas Avatar
June 26, 2020 at 1:00 AM
Thank you Andrea..
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June 25, 2020 at 12:43 PM
Hello Jenish Somadas, you should not have disturbed her hornet's nest. Enjoy your day my friend.
Somadas Avatar
June 26, 2020 at 12:59 AM
Lol..Yes Darlene..If I have another day to breath, I will not..
Riabi Dziri Avatar
June 25, 2020 at 7:32 AM
So elegant! So eloquent! So funny! A skilful and intelligent poet of great respect to not offend a buzzing wife! Wonderful work, Jenish! Best regards and blessings.
Somadas Avatar
June 26, 2020 at 12:58 AM
Lol..Thank you Besma.. Not offended.. just stir..lol..
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June 25, 2020 at 6:52 AM
So cute, love it - God bless you, Gina
Somadas Avatar
June 26, 2020 at 12:57 AM
Thank you Gina..
Pandit Avatar
June 25, 2020 at 6:37 AM
Fun read, Jenish.
Somadas Avatar
June 26, 2020 at 12:56 AM
Thank you Vijay..
Bangalee Avatar
June 25, 2020 at 6:01 AM
ha ha ha...humorous .....nice to read
Somadas Avatar
June 26, 2020 at 12:57 AM
Thank you Mahtab..
Trifiatis Avatar
June 25, 2020 at 5:20 AM
Hilarious dearest, Jenish! Absolutely hilarious. Hugs xxx
Somadas Avatar
June 26, 2020 at 12:56 AM
Thank you Demetrios..
Cunningham Avatar
June 25, 2020 at 4:09 AM
Haha loved it, I've got wise, cup of tea in bed starts the day well I've found. Tom
Somadas Avatar
June 26, 2020 at 12:56 AM
Lol..You are wise..But I was also wise till yesterday..Thank you Tom..
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