Buzzer Beater

"It sure smells like
March Madness in here,"
I offer with a grimace, scanning the
room for the cadaver responsible for the
   acrid cloud of aroma
lingering. If I possessed 
   a machete, I would
lop my own nose off,
but not to spite my face.

As I wonder how paint still
manages to cling to these long
suffering walls, I step into a
brown bag of sweaty
   debris while the host
does his own adept bit of sleepy
   dribbling, that mighty
roar of a snore punctuating
my discontent with affinity.

I try breathing through
my mouth before grabbing a
longneck, tossing it down like a
game-winning three-pointer with
   no time left on--
the clock, on the wall, that’s it! My
   lips drop a doozy of a lie as
I tear past the beached flesh
of my once dynamic friends.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Guzzi Avatar
March 29, 2009 at 12:03 PM
pubs can be stinky! Light & Love
Moreno Avatar
March 27, 2009 at 2:08 PM
Fantastic write John, I enjoyed the last stanza. The description of tossing the long neck down like a game-winning three-pointer was great. The structure you used was neat too...Raul
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