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Because I loved you, I let you Underneath my Tough layers through to the Tender parts of my heart. The Oath I gave was Never designed to Sanction you to hurt me.

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Date: 1/18/2024 11:27:00 AM
Deep and emotive use of the acrostic..
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Date: 1/18/2024 9:15:00 AM
Dear Charlotte, there is beauty in sadness and pain as your expressive acrostic shows. The imagery of both your title and your poem evoke a heartbreak of emotion. Your last three lines are as impactful as they are true. Deeply touching poetry. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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