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Butterfly Wings

tropical night sways as we glide under starlight butterfly wings land on my bare shoulder disguised as his soft familiar touch

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Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 6/20/2012 5:24:00 PM

a poetic inspiration. Masterful Rhonda

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/17/2012 2:11:00 PM

Very romantic! Congrad's on your big win. Light & Love

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 6/15/2012 1:27:00 PM

Nice and beautiful write,Rhonda...Congratulations on your win...

Kash Poet

Date: 6/15/2012 12:39:00 PM

Such a beautiful poem by you Rhonda!Congratson your win.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/15/2012 11:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "#183" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 6/15/2012 11:33:00 AM

Nicely written! Cangratulations! ~Trudy~

Terry O'Leary

Date: 6/15/2012 10:59:00 AM

Wonderful poem... congratulations... Terry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/15/2012 7:58:00 AM

I love this kind of TANKA!!! big congrats, Rhonda.

Joann Grisetti

Date: 6/15/2012 7:39:00 AM

Congratulations on your beautiful winning poem.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/15/2012 6:51:00 AM

fine imagery, soo delicate, rhonda..cheers to you for the grand win!..:)

Gwendolen Song

Date: 6/15/2012 5:03:00 AM

Superb tanka! Congrats.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/2/2012 1:11:00 PM

What a very sweet and romantic tanka, Rhonda :) I really enjoyed reading this beauty, nice and soft :D Have a great weekend and hugs to you! :D Thank you so much for all your encouraging comments :D

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/2/2012 4:09:00 AM

This is lovely and romantic Rhonda. I posted one a little bit like this called Desire. Butterflies bring out the romance in poets for sure.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/1/2012 7:54:00 PM

A WOW poem!!

Erich Goller

Date: 5/29/2012 12:36:00 PM

Butterflies are beautiful like in your Tanka poem. I enjoyed reading it, God bless you.Hugs!Erich

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/29/2012 12:36:00 PM

Romantic work..Enjoyed reading ..The flow was great..Thanks for stopping by my work..Sara

David Williams

Date: 5/29/2012 2:33:00 AM

Rhonda ...yes, I can see and feel it, well done..David

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/28/2012 10:06:00 PM

This is a truly wonderful write Rhonda! I can picture everything in your poem as if it is happened right before me eyes! I really enjoyed this fabulous work of art that you have created! I love butterflies anyway, this just brings me closer to them! I believe this might be for a contest, so good luck in the contest if you have entered into Rick's contest! Great Work!!