Butterfly Wings

lacey yellow wings flutter among spring blossoms dancing butterfly

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Jeanette Brewin

Date: 5/18/2023 10:48:00 PM

A lovely description. Well done.

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/18/2023 2:25:00 PM

This is vivid and beautiful Sandy :)

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 5/18/2023 5:47:00 PM

Thank you Heidi, as always.

Daniel Turner

Date: 5/15/2023 8:02:00 PM

Very colorful spring haiku, Sandra. Easy to see:)

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 5/18/2023 5:45:00 PM

Riding mower, in the sun, and 80°? I'm on my way!! : )

Daniel Turner
Date: 5/16/2023 10:05:00 AM

I have a riding mower, if you need sun, you are welcome to come and mow my yard anytime:) It's been in the high 80's up until today. 78 and cloudy:)

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 5/16/2023 9:33:00 AM

Thank you Daniel. Good to know that you could picture it. Spring is always lovely, just a bit chilly this year.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 5/15/2023 11:20:00 AM

I love the bright imagery, amidst a backdrop of blooms. A lovely haiku, Sandra.

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 5/15/2023 11:28:00 AM

Thank you so much Evelyn. Your kind comment is very much appreciated.

Daniel Beus

Date: 5/15/2023 8:22:00 AM

I love the simplicity of a nice haiku...thank you for that joyful image.

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 5/15/2023 8:48:00 AM

Thank you so much Daniel. A "joyful image", what a lovely comment.