Butterfly Winged Elf of Darkness

On balanced stones
This elf girl sits
In a darkening world
No moon lit
 
In balance she is
Into her orb she peers
Our crescent moon
In capture i fear
 
Imbalanced we will become
As our time and tides
Widower earth
Having lost it's bride
 
This butterflied winged dark angel
From a distant past
To land on natures planet
Steal our moon from our grasp
 
For out there is our saviour
To regain our sacred moon
Before this dark haired elf
Leaves the earth an empty room


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 7/3/2009 2:56:00 AM
this dark haired elf leads a mystery of whom she might be?she seems to have got power,lots of power--a moon stealer she is--great write--mysterious too--you re talented my highlander friend so talented--charma
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Date: 6/30/2009 5:54:00 PM
Wow, James, this was reminiscent of Shakespeare's "Midsummer Night's Dream." I love the magical quality of the angel and the elf. Absolutely amazing, dear! Love you, Carolyn
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Date: 6/30/2009 6:53:00 AM
This is a nice fantasy here James, that your creative soul mastered. Well done!
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Date: 6/30/2009 5:03:00 AM
nice. beautiful till the end. mystery. magic. awe. love. Stephanie
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Date: 6/29/2009 8:17:00 PM
WOW, this is so good. Thanks for you inspiring words.
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Date: 6/29/2009 7:36:00 PM
i like the spiritual aspect of it... well mostly because I am very spiritual..I love the line.."this butterflied winged dark angel"
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