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Butterfly Wing Man

Butterfly Wing Man


OH …. would I……could I……should I…..????
Write about the butterfly…….and why?

Awakens from his past ---full fledged
while beneath I stand ---still pledged

To hold my ground – on sacred soil
watch his translucent wings uncoil

 A gentle breeze his birth ….. updraft 
first touch of joy ‘neath fragile craft

Duty bound in ancestry
I envy him his being free

Watch him praise the rising sun
bathe in the heat that I must shun

Nestled in his petaled bed
I see him slowly dip his head

Promises to nature kept
tears for those who never wept

Wings that change the course of time
Wings – that sadly – are not mine.



12/3/2015

submitted to – Write About Butterflies – Poetry contest
sponsor – SKAT A

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Date: 12/19/2015 8:52:00 AM
You made me smile, this is quite beautiful, congrats on your win.
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Date: 12/18/2015 11:12:00 PM
Wow great take with this lovely poem John.. love those final lines.. Congrats on big win!
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Date: 12/18/2015 4:32:00 PM
wow, that last couplet was so amazing. Love a good ending on a good poem!!
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Date: 12/18/2015 3:28:00 PM
Hi John great flight of fancy you took off on with this one, congrats on the result.'
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Date: 12/18/2015 1:52:00 AM
JOHN, Congratulations on your wonderful butterfly win. Love LINDA
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Date: 12/18/2015 12:32:00 AM
A terrific Couplet, John, much enjoyed. Well done. Regards, Viv
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Date: 12/17/2015 8:39:00 PM
Yes, as stated below, John - very magical and lovely! Congrats on your nice placement in the contest. Sandra
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Date: 12/17/2015 7:28:00 PM
JOHN, I'm impressed, I guess men can write about any given theme. Thank you for supporting my contest. It was a delight to host. I'm still smiling after reading and closing and posting my new blog. Congratulations on your AWESOME WIN... Stop by my latest Blog "I GUESS THEY CAN... HOW ABOUT IT LADIES???" help celebrate and tell me why you decided to join THIS contest. Looking forward in hearing from you. Love SKAT
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Date: 12/7/2015 12:42:00 AM
John - I am in love with this poem. 7. Not only did you 'man up' with your butterflies, you 'poet-upped' - (I must be tired, but it makes sense, right?) Truly love, creative, lyrical and magical as Julia wrote. A wonderful poem for any sex or age at any time on any place on earth! Tired, but sincere ... CayCay
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Date: 12/4/2015 11:51:00 AM
How magical! Best of luck in the contest!
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John Lawless
Date: 12/5/2015 10:22:00 AM
Thanks Julia, nice to hear from you.

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